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5/9/2026 for Dramatize the Desires Poetry Contest sponsored by Ink Empress

Hold Me in Your Heart

Although I've loved you for so very long,  
adrift, afloat, a melody, in air,
looking for a place where I can belong, 
dreaming of your good ladyship, so fair. 

I know I'm invisible to your eyes -
my humble features, hopelessly blurred.
My voice, only just inaudible sighs,
hoping, for the sweet day it will be heard. 
  
My dear, this is my last and final plea. 
This old jalopy, now a pile of rust, 
this hunk of driftwood floating on the sea,
this flesh and blood, transforming into dust.

Hold me in your heart 'fore I disappear,
If you don't know me, I was never here.
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Miller Avatar
May 15, 2026 at 7:54 AM
I love a sonnet and this is great, congratulations
Crandall Avatar
May 15, 2026 at 6:16 PM
Thanks, Terry!
Goldsmith Avatar
May 14, 2026 at 11:35 AM
Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your wonderful "Hold Me in Your Heart" write/story. WOW!!! What a write/ending. Love It... Have a blessed day with your wonderful win..............
Crandall Avatar
May 15, 2026 at 6:16 PM
Thanks, Paula!
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May 15, 2026 at 6:15 PM
Thanks, Paula!
Empress Avatar
May 14, 2026 at 6:23 AM
What a poignant and deeply sonnet this is dear David, i felt the emotions within this for some reason, and it moved me and stirred my soul, so very deeply! I absolutely love the couplet at the end, " Hold me in your heart 'fore I disappear, If you don't know me, I was never here." wow! Fave it is! Thank you for writing! Pleasure reading! Congratulations on your win! Sending you light always
Crandall Avatar
May 15, 2026 at 6:16 PM
Thanks so much Ink - I'm glad you felt it!
Crandall Avatar
May 15, 2026 at 6:15 PM
Thanks so much Ink - I'm glad you felt it!
Dietrich Avatar
May 9, 2026 at 3:19 PM
I really like the metaphors you used in this sweet sonnet. Especially yourself as an old jalopy! What a great ending couplet!
Crandall Avatar
May 9, 2026 at 11:32 PM
Thanks, Andrea!
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