Hold Me In Your Arms

The time will come, my dear, and very soon,
When locked within your loving arms I'll be,
Around us move the earth, the sun, the moon,
The centre of the universe are we.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Ashley Avatar
October 1, 2017 at 9:54 PM
Oh I just love your poetically expressed romance Peter. Such a great sweet write! And a belated congrats:)
Rees Avatar
October 2, 2017 at 6:31 AM
Thank you Susan for this lovely comment.
Webster Avatar
September 19, 2017 at 11:34 AM
congrats, Peter
One Avatar
September 15, 2017 at 10:11 AM
nice romantic lines..
Cresswell Avatar
September 13, 2017 at 8:59 AM
I just melted finding it difficult to write. Lovely write goes straight to the heart.
Rees Avatar
September 13, 2017 at 9:50 AM
it was written from the heart, to my then girlfriend, now my wife of 55 years. It seemed to fit the theme of one of the current contests, so I thought I'd dust off the cobwebs and give it an airing. Glad you liked it.
De Beaulieu Avatar
September 12, 2017 at 5:43 PM
Peter you wrote a beautiful love poem. Have a nice day my friend.
Rees Avatar
September 13, 2017 at 11:28 AM
Many thanks Darlene
Andresen Avatar
September 12, 2017 at 3:03 PM
- A beautiful thought, Peter - She's waiting for you when the time comes - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Rees Avatar
September 13, 2017 at 11:27 AM
Thank you Anne-Lise for your lovely comment.
Pandit Avatar
September 12, 2017 at 12:11 PM
What a lovely romantic poem Peter--enjoyed reading it!
Rees Avatar
September 13, 2017 at 11:27 AM
Thanks Vijay. Love is all around !
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