Get Your Premium Membership

Hold Me Close My Sweet

Golden enchanting warm beautiful magic falling behind mountains spell binding A setting sun bows down relinquishing her throne paints glowing amber clouds faraway in a distant horizon dreams She smiled while whispering the few very freeing words while she ran deeper into her bright future Darkening skies breathing daylights lastly sighs her last breath glistening gold dancing with the shadows rippling waves call out inside one thousand echoes Darkness slowly swallowing light silk satin ebony The little lights knew it couldn't last because evil drifts in as the shadows of the past Making way for the stars winking silver Rocked gently side to side on a smiling moon an eclipsing marriage when the sun kisses the moon golden silvery beautiful This is how we are going to be so holy, magic and so great we carry experience with the soul and heart to create A co write written by Liam Mcdaid and Anne-Lise Andresen

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 1/4/2015 2:21:00 PM
Excellent co-write, Liam and Anne Lise! This one is very tight-knit; the imagery and romantic feel very evident. #7 // paul
Login to Reply
Date: 1/4/2015 12:04:00 PM
Liam and Anne-Lise, Beautiful pen with most wondrous imagery and verses. Very Well-Done!! Best Always, Gary
Login to Reply
Date: 1/4/2015 9:00:00 AM
How lovely....cheers Tim
Login to Reply
Date: 1/4/2015 3:50:00 AM
Hello Liam & Anne Lise! This is a very beautiful and romantic poem. Smiling. Excellent collaboration between you two as always! So full of love and romance, one to be held very close to ones heart, my dearest friends Liam and Anne-Lise. Smiling. Just awesome !You're amazing poets! Great use of imagery! A solid 7 for each one of you! Your pens are truly golden!. Smiling. I wish you a very Happy New Year to each of you! Wish you both a wonderful day! God bless you! :) Love and hugs! xxoxxoxx D.
Login to Reply

Book: Shattered Sighs