Hold Me Close My Sweet

Golden enchanting warm beautiful magic 
falling behind mountains spell binding 
A setting sun bows down relinquishing her throne 
paints glowing amber clouds faraway in a distant horizon dreams 
She smiled while whispering the few very freeing words 
while she ran deeper into her bright future 

Darkening skies breathing daylights lastly sighs 
her last breath glistening gold dancing with the shadows 
rippling waves call out inside one thousand echoes 
Darkness slowly swallowing light silk satin ebony 
The little lights knew it couldn't last 
because evil drifts in 
as the shadows of the past 

Making way for the stars winking silver 
Rocked gently side to side on a smiling moon 
an eclipsing marriage when the sun kisses the moon 
golden silvery beautiful 
This is how we are going to be 
so holy, magic and so great 
we carry experience 
with the soul and heart to create 

A co write written by Liam Mcdaid and Anne-Lise Andresen
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Callus Avatar
January 4, 2015 at 2:21 PM
Excellent co-write, Liam and Anne Lise! This one is very tight-knit; the imagery and romantic feel very evident. #7 // paul
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January 4, 2015 at 12:04 PM
Liam and Anne-Lise, Beautiful pen with most wondrous imagery and verses. Very Well-Done!! Best Always, Gary
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January 4, 2015 at 9:00 AM
How lovely....cheers Tim
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January 4, 2015 at 3:50 AM
Hello Liam & Anne Lise! This is a very beautiful and romantic poem. Smiling. Excellent collaboration between you two as always! So full of love and romance, one to be held very close to ones heart, my dearest friends Liam and Anne-Lise. Smiling. Just awesome !You're amazing poets! Great use of imagery! A solid 7 for each one of you! Your pens are truly golden!. Smiling. I wish you a very Happy New Year to each of you! Wish you both a wonderful day! God bless you! :) Love and hugs! xxoxxoxx D.
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