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Hurtling toward me was a messy, slimy mass Of masticated food from a diner with no class! Glancing off my head (I ducked!), it landed on poor old Mama, right smack dab in the face. It slid, then rolled Onto her lap. The offender saw her mopping her face. Unabashed, he refilled and, without a trace of grace, Talked, with cavernous mouth wide open, disgusting us all. Henceforth, Food Flinger, cease showing such egregious gall. November 3, 2021

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Date: 12/12/2021 7:20:00 AM
LOL, had a chuckle picturing this
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Date: 11/7/2021 9:35:00 PM
yuk it puts one of their food looking at someone eating and acting like an absolute imbecile but your poem was spot on, i enjoyed it and thoroughly and agree with you, disgraceful manners. Hugs and love Jennifer.
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Date: 11/6/2021 4:43:00 PM
Hello Janice ... for some reason I screwed my nose up reading your verse, but it is the topic, not your verse - I hope you all got over this Janice - Lindsay
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 11/6/2021 6:20:00 PM
Thanks, Lindsay! It's an exaggeration. Janice
Date: 11/5/2021 4:27:00 PM
yucky yucky. I don't think I have had the displeasure of meeting someone this bad. Thank heavens!!
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 11/6/2021 6:20:00 PM
Thanks
Date: 11/3/2021 6:27:00 PM
How disgusting dear poet, :) lol, mom always said, take small bites, it tastes better too .
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 11/4/2021 6:04:00 AM
Thanks, Mystic. Janice :-)
Date: 11/3/2021 3:26:00 PM
Yikes, not someone I'd like to share a table with. Hope you're well Janice. Tom
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 11/4/2021 6:03:00 AM
LOL! Thanks, Tom. Janice
Date: 11/3/2021 12:09:00 PM
Reminds me of my first day in NYC; I stopped at a vendor cafe, sat down at a table and before I had one bite, a man sat down at my table and stuffed a slice of chocolate cake in this mouth which he continue to chew, slobber, and talk at the same time, so I left without having a bite to eat . . . .
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 11/3/2021 1:51:00 PM
LOL! Glad you could relate to the poem, Rico! Janice
Date: 11/3/2021 11:21:00 AM
True story?? Nonetheless, a disgusting Acrostic in the most deliciously funny way! Great one Janice xxoo
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 11/3/2021 1:52:00 PM
Thanks so much, Mike. Janice

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