Jenna Logan Poet Triolet

Hobson's Choice

We are never allowed a voice
When gasping for our final breath
And Hobson didn't offer a choice
We are never allowed a voice
There is no reason to rejoice
For in the regnant grasp of death
We are never allowed a voice
When gasping for our final breath



October 21, 2020
Pick-A-Title, Vol 24 - Triolet
Sponsored by: Edward Ibeh

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Paul Callus November 13, 2020 at 1:22 PM No beating around the bush here, Jenna! When the time comes it's no good throwing a tantrum:) Congratulations on placing first. Regards // paul

Edward Ibeh November 13, 2020 at 11:46 AM Heartiest congratulations on your top win in my contest with this brilliant triolet, Jenna:-)

JC Brul November 13, 2020 at 8:36 AM Very nice composition dear Jenna..Congratulations!

Sara Kendrick November 13, 2020 at 6:23 AM Congrats on your winning work. Sara

Beata Agustin November 13, 2020 at 2:26 AM Wow! Congrats! Thanks for presenting such realistic perspective in your awesome poetic style. God bless you.

Anne-Lise Andresen November 13, 2020 at 2:21 AM - Congratulations on your great win, Jenna :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

John Watt November 12, 2020 at 9:55 PM Wise and touching words about that last moment of life. "We are never allowed a voice". A moment to relinquish all ego. Wonderful writing, and congrats on your top win, Jenna.

Eve Roper November 12, 2020 at 9:29 PM Well done, Jenna, congratulations on your win.

Linda Alice Fowler November 12, 2020 at 5:32 PM Very nice Jenna! Congratulations on the win! Linda

Jan Allison November 12, 2020 at 3:38 PM well written triolet Jenna, many congrats on your win with this thought provoking piece:-) hugs Jan xx

Alexis Y. November 12, 2020 at 3:04 PM Hi Jena, You penned such a good entry for such a controversial subject. Congratulations on your fine win. Have a wonderful day:-) Alexis

Peter Dome October 22, 2020 at 7:11 AM Sadly so true Jenna. Great write. thank you for showing me how to do this style. Take care. Pete. Jenna Logan October 22, 2020 at 12:20 PM You're quite welcome, Pete, and thank for the comments. Give it a try!

Mark Koplin October 21, 2020 at 2:55 PM That's quite the poem Jenna, Great job! Jenna Logan October 21, 2020 at 4:55 PM Thank you, Mark.

Gordon Mcconnell October 21, 2020 at 1:29 PM Nice piece Jenna, very well-penned with the lovely flow too. Jenna Logan October 21, 2020 at 4:55 PM Hi Gordon, and thank you.

Tom Cunningham October 21, 2020 at 7:36 AM You captured the final moment well in your verse Jenna, unfortunately a choice we'll all be given at the end. Tom Jenna Logan October 21, 2020 at 10:23 AM Let's not tarry on the thought, Tom. He won't listen to our voices, so we'll tune him out, too! Thanks so much.

Joanna Daniel October 21, 2020 at 6:34 AM This is a fantastic one, Jenna:) Jenna Logan October 21, 2020 at 10:22 AM Thanks a whole lot, Jo. I'm glad you like it.

Kim Rodrigues October 21, 2020 at 6:12 AM Wow, Jenna! You’ve captured the final moment! Jenna Logan October 21, 2020 at 6:28 AM Thanks so much, Kim. It's nice a visit you've paid me this morning.