Hobo Town Hall....

Underneath a cemet overpass
Fire's burn in discarded oil drums
shadowy sillouettes huddle in circles,
flame flickering light dances it's heat
seemingly mesmerized are those,as
they watch the rising cinders float above
like their dreams of past charred to ashes...

Empty bottles strewn at their feet
the voice at the bottom of glass
doesn't hold the same magic as it first did
when they wrapped their lips on it's top,
empty hollow sounds,coming from
even more so,empty hollow spirits....

Town hall of a different sort
gathering of a different community action
if you want to call this action...
...but,a different kind of gathering all the same,
same action....different town....
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Jordan Avatar
September 3, 2008 at 9:36 PM
Jay my man you sure captured the seen down by the fright yard with this poem - Great yet sad subject matter - as always very well written - God Bless Jay
Reynolds Avatar
September 2, 2008 at 3:54 PM
I wonder the same as Vince...they were once full of promise...things can change so fast...a touchng write filled with commpasion's voice, well done, love Kristin
Suzadail Jr. Avatar
September 2, 2008 at 9:26 AM
They have their own world. How do we have the heart to look away and pretend it's not there. You poetry reaches out Jay. I've seen this and wonder about their childhood and the days of being someone's child. God Bless. Vince
Burton Avatar
September 2, 2008 at 7:24 AM
This poem is really good, connects well, great flow and also makes me read it twice. love your poetry always your very talented.
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