Hoarfrost

Dancing and sparkling, Grasping the sun, the hoarfrost Glimmers like diamonds.

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Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 12/7/2014 7:34:00 AM

- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup, Lisa - I choose your first beautiful Haiku ! - Nice to meet you! - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too - Keep the PoetrySoup as a haven - (Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you for posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison

Date: 12/2/2014 5:23:00 PM

stunning haiku:-) hugs Jan x

Jayaratne Weerakkody

Date: 12/2/2014 11:23:00 AM

Nice haiku. It depicts how strongly express ideas with several words.