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Hoar Frost

Hoar frost **** 
                      gently dressing up the barren trees****
                                                                               in coats of white.****



By Phyllis Babcock
Monoku 
For Constance's contest

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Kabuteng P.Ink K.

December 11, 2010 at 11:41 PM

what a cute image this brings, Phyllis :) enjoyed this monoku of yours :)

Andrea Dietrich

December 9, 2010 at 7:19 PM

I love that middle part, gently dressing up the barren trees. Yes, the girl was expecting a ring but got a thingamajiggy! (the bibelot) Luv, Andrea

Carol Sunshine Brown

December 8, 2010 at 4:38 AM

I am reading some very amazing and diverse poetry this morning. I am glad yours was among the poetry I was able to read today. Thank you for sharing your writing with us Phyllis. Wishing you and yours a wonderful Holiday Season. The best to you in the contest. Love,Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

December 7, 2010 at 8:29 PM

Very visual and very imagery filled Monoku Phyllis.. good luck in the contest luv..

December 7, 2010 at 5:47 PM

Nice use of imagery with an artistic presentation. Best wishes in the contest. Thank you for the cute e-card you sent. Wishing you a wonderful Christmas. Karen