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Hoar Frost

Hoar frost **** gently dressing up the barren trees**** in coats of white.**** By Phyllis Babcock Monoku For Constance's contest

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Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 12/11/2010 11:41:00 PM

what a cute image this brings, Phyllis :) enjoyed this monoku of yours :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/9/2010 7:19:00 PM

I love that middle part, gently dressing up the barren trees. Yes, the girl was expecting a ring but got a thingamajiggy! (the bibelot) Luv, Andrea

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 12/8/2010 4:38:00 AM

I am reading some very amazing and diverse poetry this morning. I am glad yours was among the poetry I was able to read today. Thank you for sharing your writing with us Phyllis. Wishing you and yours a wonderful Holiday Season. The best to you in the contest. Love,Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 12/7/2010 8:29:00 PM

Very visual and very imagery filled Monoku Phyllis.. good luck in the contest luv..

Date: 12/7/2010 5:47:00 PM

Nice use of imagery with an artistic presentation. Best wishes in the contest. Thank you for the cute e-card you sent. Wishing you a wonderful Christmas. Karen

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 12/7/2010 3:23:00 PM

Nicely done..it does seem as if the trees are dressed with frost. BG

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 12/7/2010 3:21:00 PM

Nice thought nicely explained with good images, Phyllis

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 12/7/2010 3:17:00 PM

Love this image, Phyllis. Best wishes in Constance's contest!