Hoar Frost

When the hoar frost spins,
spiderwebs of feathered ice,
the sun does not shine.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Slaughter Avatar
December 12, 2023 at 10:48 AM
I love this one, Jerry. One note, if I may...it doesn't need the punctuation.
Brotherton Avatar
December 12, 2023 at 2:16 PM
Thanks for the info, Jim. These are the first attempts at something other than throwing some words onto paper. I appreciate any critiques. Have a glorious day my friend.
Rodrigues Avatar
December 12, 2023 at 9:50 AM
Nice one! Great imagery!
Brotherton Avatar
December 12, 2023 at 2:16 PM
Thanks, Kim
One Avatar
December 12, 2023 at 8:24 AM
Sounds very cold... freezing imagery!
Brotherton Avatar
December 12, 2023 at 2:18 PM
Hoar frost and ice flowers are usually signs of rapid temperature drops.
Baker Avatar
December 12, 2023 at 6:15 AM
Achilling Haiku with imagery that makes me cold, my friend. Thanks for sharing nature with us through your poetry. Smiles ~ Blessings Bill
Brotherton Avatar
December 12, 2023 at 2:20 PM
If it gets too cold, you know I ain't gonna be out to see it.
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