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Hmmm???

Aloft in the clouds, I suddenly realized I could not be. I began plunging to the ground, which turned out to be a mirage. I could not figure out where I was but I agreed it was not here. My fall turned into stopping and this energy started lifting me. I tried considering this until I made two steps off of the edge. I start rising again, reaching a place resembling where I began. But now the clouds are solid, formed with the deepest emptiness. Hmmm???

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Date: 5/23/2015 10:20:00 AM
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Date: 6/26/2010 6:33:00 PM
A very pondering write,, enjoyed ...P.D.
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Date: 6/26/2010 5:41:00 PM
welcome to poetry soup!
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