Hmmm???

Aloft in the clouds, I suddenly realized I could not be. I began plunging to the ground, which 
turned out to be a mirage. I could not figure out where I was but I agreed it was not here. 
My fall turned into stopping and this energy started lifting me. I tried considering this until I 
made two steps off of the edge. I start rising again, reaching a place resembling where I 
began. But now the clouds are solid, formed with the deepest emptiness. Hmmm???
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May 23, 2015 at 10:20 AM
:)...........
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June 26, 2010 at 6:33 PM
A very pondering write,, enjoyed ...P.D.
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June 26, 2010 at 5:41 PM
welcome to poetry soup!
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