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Hitting the Sack Premiere Contest Winner

Alarm Bursts calm Day dawns Loud yawns Blow nose Stretch toes Quick wash Splish splosh Grab vest Get dressed Gulp tea Then flee I'm late Stressed state The boss Is cross Harsh fact; I'm sacked Next day Hooray Lie in Big grin! 27.09.22 A BRIAN STRAND PREMIERE CHOICE Poetry Contest Your Favourite Rhyming Poem From The Second Half Of 2022 Poetry Contest Sponsor: Julia Ward

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Date: 2/3/2023 10:32:00 AM
Wendy, fun little string of morning vignettes told in the challenging footle form... I can relate to so many of these! Congrats for your win. Blessings ~ John
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Date: 2/2/2023 12:34:00 AM
Well done!
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Date: 2/1/2023 11:05:00 AM
Cute Wendy. Congratulations on your win! :)
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Date: 9/30/2022 4:07:00 AM
lol you tell a nice story here, way to go Wendy, Congrats
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Date: 9/29/2022 10:36:00 PM
Grand Footle. Congratulations!
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Date: 9/28/2022 3:38:00 PM
Much angst but in the end it all feels well…lol. Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 9/28/2022 11:30:00 AM
"Quick wash splish splosh" did it for me! Enjoyed! Aloha!
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Date: 9/27/2022 2:12:00 PM
Good li'l Footle
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Wendy Watson
Date: 9/27/2022 2:23:00 PM
Thanks so much for reading and taking the time to comment,Jeff. I seldom write poetry these days but dip in to the site now and then.

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