Hitting Me With Your Love

It brings me to tears
One of my biggest fears 
Is when you hit me with your love 

It hurts, and I bruise 
The colours black and blue 
When you hit me with all your love 

"Why, why, why? 
are you blue?" "Being bruised?" (Abused?)
No, no, no, my mom's just hittin' me with love.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Gupta Avatar
September 29, 2016 at 7:11 AM
Candid emotions ... Very good ...
Sasaki Avatar
October 1, 2016 at 10:03 AM
thank you :)
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