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Hitting Me With Your Love

It brings me to tears One of my biggest fears Is when you hit me with your love It hurts, and I bruise The colours black and blue When you hit me with all your love "Why, why, why? are you blue?" "Being bruised?" (Abused?) No, no, no, my mom's just hittin' me with love.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 9/29/2016 7:11:00 AM
Candid emotions ... Very good ...
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Kyoko Sasaki
Date: 10/1/2016 10:03:00 AM
thank you :)

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