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Hithti

Higher and higher you fly Into the estranged fire The smoke absorbing into the light Has given me such a fright! The more you struggle the less you juggle In the evenings sight

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 5/20/2015 10:55:00 AM
Hello nicole, thanks for the visit. You could have categorized this as an acrostic, except, I'm not sure hithti is a word. Hence your choice of free verse. :) Love the message in this piece. The intermingling's of personal relationships is an enigma, wrapped in a conundrum sometimes. Peace. :)
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Date: 4/20/2015 11:11:00 AM
Hi Nicole, great work! Very deep! I enjoy your poems, have a great day!
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