Hithti

Higher and higher you fly
Into the estranged fire
The smoke absorbing into the light 
Has given me such a fright!
The more you struggle the less you juggle 
In the evenings sight
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Johnson Avatar
May 20, 2015 at 10:55 AM
Hello nicole, thanks for the visit. You could have categorized this as an acrostic, except, I'm not sure hithti is a word. Hence your choice of free verse. :) Love the message in this piece. The intermingling's of personal relationships is an enigma, wrapped in a conundrum sometimes. Peace. :)
Robinson Avatar
April 20, 2015 at 11:11 AM
Hi Nicole, great work! Very deep! I enjoy your poems, have a great day!
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