Hitching Hoochie

Drinks fridge murmurs accusations at me
Seals connect with whoosh of door close
Defuses incriminating strip of lights lairy
Where I go from this station, God knows!

Lady taking my coins sneers, fat old wench
Bottled coffee shaking, I scope the scene
Funny country fuel stop, platform with bench
Five feet above bowsers, no other beings

Infusing creamy caffeine flows frozen veins
Squinting, suddenly morning haze is scared 
Flung away by fireball promising burn's pain
Screech of rest room door makes me aware

Swaggered jean jostling cowboy, crotch itch
Rips sunstruck silver jangle of keys unfurled 
His calloused hands fondle freedom tickets
Flanellette shirt, dog fur dull unkempt curls

Moment slipping, I extend my leg, stretched
Sandshoe foot dangled bare ankled amber
His attentive sway, reaction I needed to get
Casual smile exchange shows easy candour 

Disappeared Adam's apple displays his nerves
Flipped flaxen cascades accompany my laughs
I appear the type of slender he doesn't deserve 
Ask mystery man where his bloody car's parked

Bow legged, he saunteringly walks me across
Feet scuff on rough bitumen arrest birds
Chrome, maroon forty year old ute's new gloss
Brings his chest thrust pride, without words

Thick doors reassuringly clunk open, vynyl
Glides my compact package, legs swung in
Sun warmed cabin smells of 70's revival
Decomposing foam, dashboard shrinking 

Glances to get my approval of rev shudder
I grin, grab the arm rest in readiness 
Rear wheels kick dust, bold engine thunders
Gravel edges send intended impediment 

Thrumming along open road, windows down 
Throw my medusas in mad frenzy, big relief
Inserts itself, I need to get out of this town
Need him to take me there, encounter brief



10th September 2020

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020



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Date: 9/13/2020 8:44:00 PM
ah yes...it comes so easy for some ... good one :)
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