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Hitchhiker



Military boots grip the pavement,
hair in a Sarah Connor ponytail
Got her sunglasses on at midnight,
waiting patiently for the right ride
to stop
And swing open an invitation
to rest her road wary bones
From the bend of the elbow,
	to the cut leather gloved hand 
waving a five finger salute
With a Rambo blade strapped to the thigh
of her shredded, faded blue jeans,
	she has no hesitation riding shotgun
with a human unknown
Inside her deerskin vest,
she holsters a Beretta 9-mil 
Trained as a sniper ... shoot to kill
Speaking politely to the stranger,
she tersely says: “keep your hands off the merchandise,
and keep your eyes on the road
	     And please, don’t make me have to say it twice ...
I'm saying this once, and I'm saying it nice"
With a nod of understanding,
they both settle in for the long haul
The ten thousand raven-strand beauty
says she’s going halfway to wherever 
			the occupant’s destination is
She remarks with a wry smile: “tonight ain’t such a bad day to live”
The driver assesses the situation,
and glumly decides that tonight ain’t a good day to die
So the hitchhiker exits from the vehicle,
thanks the stranger for the rest and the ride
After getting a bath, a meal and a good night sleep
	from the local comfort environs;
she packs her gear, it’s time to be on the move again
There’s always someplace that can use her unique skills
Heading back to the edge of the road,
with no particular place in mind to go ... just stay on the eagle fly
			Wing it on the sky dive
Hitchhiker, free and windblown — 
With storm cloud eyes thunder bursting,
she only focuses on which car to next parachute in

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 7/15/2017 1:26:00 PM
A hard woman; the poem itself flowed well and the imagery was absolutely fab!
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Date: 7/13/2017 5:08:00 PM
This was so cool Freddie. You brought this woman to life for me. Halfway through I forgot I was reading as I was absorbed by your story,. This is top notch my friend.
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Date: 7/13/2017 4:50:00 PM
I believe you're about ready to start the Great American Novel Freddie. Well done. How about a sequel?
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Date: 7/13/2017 3:23:00 PM
Interesting one Freddie. Entertaining and suspenseful read. Leaves the reader thinking too. :)
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Date: 7/13/2017 10:05:00 AM
She sounded like adventurous lady. I love her style too :)
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Freddie Robinson Jr.
Date: 7/13/2017 2:01:00 PM
Ty, Akkina. If she got a Sarah Connor hairdo, you bet she's adventurous. Lol! Appreciate you stopping by and commenting. Love and peace.

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