Hitch 3: Not Vegas

Please don't say Vegas.
We're halfway between Durban and Bloem',
so don't say Vegas, okay ?
Thankfully you found a way, reluctantly,
to settle on the right answer
without saying it out loud.
All the way to the beach,
so I hopped in, and I didn't laugh.
I introduced myself
and for an awkward moment
you introduced neither
yourself nor that guy you wanted to be.
Perhaps you didn't want to introduce
yourself, anonymous as me.
And you didn't need to introduce him,
how could I possibly not know his name ?
Then, after a moment of that,
you introduced him anyways.
It would be a long, silly drive.
You said it. Your voice was not unconvincing,
you had it pretty much down.
You actually said the name,
as if you wanted us both to believe it
but knew that neither of us did.
I'd never seen sideburns so thick,
or hair so black and slick,
the sunglasses looked the part too.
The rest of it was not as flamboyant
as The King would have wanted it to be.
I was friendly and nice
and made sure not to laugh,
but we both knew the truth,
and I really wanted
to be far from Bloem' today.

16th August 2018
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Lamoureux Avatar
August 23, 2018 at 8:38 AM
Yes you ar right!
Lamoureux Avatar
August 21, 2018 at 7:41 AM
Ha ha, when he dropped you off I hope you said “Thankyou, thankyou very much!”
Sharp Avatar
August 22, 2018 at 10:29 AM
I've always thought of it as 'thang'yoo'.
Pandit Avatar
August 18, 2018 at 7:00 AM
Your rides are very interesting..I enjoyed the conversation Lawrence. I see them all in your words.
Sharp Avatar
August 19, 2018 at 1:30 AM
Thanks Vijay, I'm glad you liked them.
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