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Hit the Ground

HIT THE GROUND before I hit the ground and all this fades to dust before I turn around and start to walk away before forever is never and all dreams lofty hopes are castles in the skies of whimsical lavish desires before times tides turn to a surging rush deluge flooding out veracity in hues of ocean blues before authenticity takes on forged personae when mirages of delusion compel me to hit the ground © Kim van Breda—26 January 2015

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Date: 5/27/2015 7:15:00 AM
I came across a prestigious list of the top 100 most published poets here and I am not surprise. Your quality indeed goes hand in hand with your quantity. I'll check one or two more of your works because this has given me a unique satisfaction. I give you a handshake of a definite 7!
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Date: 5/23/2015 6:27:00 PM
Lol, what an interesting piece Kim, I like your poem it makes me laugh......thanks for shared this beautiful piece.......Afolabl.
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