Kim Van Breda Poet Verse

Hit the Ground

HIT THE GROUND

before I hit the ground
and all this fades to dust
before I turn around
and start to walk away

before forever is never
and all dreams lofty hopes
are castles in the skies of
whimsical lavish desires

before times tides turn
to a surging rush deluge
flooding out veracity
in hues of ocean blues

before authenticity
takes on forged personae
when mirages of delusion
compel me to hit 
the 
ground




© Kim van Breda—26 January 2015

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Funom Makama May 27, 2015 at 7:15 AM I came across a prestigious list of the top 100 most published poets here and I am not surprise. Your quality indeed goes hand in hand with your quantity. I'll check one or two more of your works because this has given me a unique satisfaction. I give you a handshake of a definite 7!

Afolabi Muideen May 23, 2015 at 6:27 PM Lol, what an interesting piece Kim, I like your poem it makes me laugh......thanks for shared this beautiful piece.......Afolabl.