Hit 'N' Run

She's been knocked down Or she's got knocked Up, She might loose her life Or she brings a life, She fights for her life Or she adapts to new life, She's in a state of coma Or she can't tell d owner, She hears d prayers said for her Or she hears d jeers made at her, She's just 17 & screams 'I can't go'! Or she's just 17& screams 'pussshh'! She sees his face & she's scared Or she sees his face & she's happy, She meets d reaper & she's gone Or she sees her baby & he's Born.

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/6/2016 9:33:00 PM

:) LINDA

Skat A

Date: 5/15/2014 9:02:00 AM

ANTHONY, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile, others passed, when I first join the soup 4 years ago. I wish you the best when it comes to your compositions. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/14/2014 3:42:00 AM

- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup, Anthony :) - I choose your first nice written poem - Nice to meet you :) - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/13/2014 1:00:00 PM

Anthony., A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community, as I did when I first join, March 2010. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry ha-ha a special pair:) here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@"

Anthony Tony D Punstar Massy

Date: 5/13/2014 12:20:00 PM

Thanks 4 d encouragement guys,I just started writing on 6-may-2014

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 5/13/2014 10:32:00 AM

Very moving poem, great imagery. Thank you for sharing. Well done!

James Hyler

Date: 5/13/2014 10:22:00 AM

Thank you for sharing :) It touched my heart