Hit Me With Your Best Shot

I was just walking down the street
when it hit me
a quick jab….followed
by a crushing right cross.
I staggered….stunned
by the suddenness of
a seemingly unprovoked attack.
Life, fate, Karma…WHAT!!!
I covered up, rolled, bobbed left,
feinted right, slid along the ropes
found the safety of the corner,
thanked Ali for the rope-a-dope.

I had forgotten the rules of life
“Protect yourself at all times”,
the bell will ring at sunrise
failure to answer the bell
will result in disqualification,
there is no standing eight count
you cannot be saved by the bell,
the bell will ring at sunset.

The sunrise bell summons me 
to the center of the ring.
I touch gloves with life,
with fate, with Karma.
The dance begins slowly.
Slide smoothly but quickly,
stick, jab, counter, cover.
To date I have taken on all comers,
dealt with their strength,
outwitted and outlasted the cunning,
outpunched the punchers,
outpointed the pure boxers.

So I stand, battered, but triumphant
in the center of life, hands held high
awaiting another sunrise bell.
A wily, weathered, champion
challenging life, fate, Karma to
“HIT ME WITH YOUR BEST SHOT”
“FIRE AWAY”

John G. Lawless
6/19/2015

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 5/16/2018 12:30:00 PM
KOOO
Login to Reply
Date: 7/7/2015 1:04:00 AM
John, congratulations on your Triple Threat win. Love LINDA
Login to Reply
Date: 7/6/2015 8:38:00 PM
this is awesome... SK
Login to Reply
Date: 7/6/2015 3:05:00 PM
oh just seeing your suggestion for me below. Hmmm. that was a good idea, John!! It would have made for a great collaboration. Anyway, so glad this did well in the contest. Congratulations.
Login to Reply
Date: 7/6/2015 12:07:00 PM
This is a knockout John! congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
Login to Reply
Date: 7/6/2015 8:33:00 AM
You are a great story teller! Thank you for entering my contest with this! :)
Login to Reply
Date: 6/22/2015 3:39:00 PM
Amazing writing and how it ended with that reference to the cool rock song. I really enjoyed this one, John. This is one of the contests I have not 'tackled" yet. Should I do Girls just wanna have fun?
Login to Reply
Lawless Avatar
John Lawless
Date: 6/22/2015 4:00:00 PM
Andrea, I think you should conspire with a few of the other "girls" and collaborate on the "Girls Just Wanna Have Fun" theme.
Date: 6/22/2015 9:49:00 AM
You read my Hit Me poem and said "interesting take." So is yours. I love the modern-allegorical approach! Janice (Jancan)
Login to Reply
Lawless Avatar
John Lawless
Date: 6/22/2015 4:04:00 PM
Janice, thanks for stopping by to read and comment. I sometimes us the expression "interesting take" when a poem breaks from the conformity of the usual and leads me somewhere else in thought or into reflection on the multiple meanings hidden in all poems.
Date: 6/19/2015 11:56:00 PM
parry the blows, right on, john... you inspire with this fearless write.. huggs
Login to Reply
Lawless Avatar
John Lawless
Date: 6/22/2015 4:01:00 PM
Nette, I think all poets and writers have lived a similar metaphoric experience.
Get a Premium Membership
Get more exposure for your poetry and more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Radiant Verses: A Journey Through Inspiring Poetry

Member Area

My Admin
Profile and Settings
Edit My Poems
Edit My Quotes
Edit My Short Stories
Edit My Articles
My Comments Inboxes
My Comments Outboxes
Soup Mail
Poetry Contests
Contest Results/Status
Followers
Poems of Poets I Follow
Friend Builder

Soup Social

Poetry Forum
New/Upcoming Features
The Wall
Soup Facebook Page
Who is Online
Link to Us

Member Poems

Poems - Top 100 New
Poems - Top 100 All-Time
Poems - Best
Poems - by Topic
Poems - New (All)
Poems - New (PM)
Poems - New by Poet
Poems - Read
Poems - Unread

Member Poets

Poets - Best New
Poets - New
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems Recent
Poets - Top 100 Community
Poets - Top 100 Contest

Famous Poems

Famous Poems - African American
Famous Poems - Best
Famous Poems - Classical
Famous Poems - English
Famous Poems - Haiku
Famous Poems - Love
Famous Poems - Short
Famous Poems - Top 100

Famous Poets

Famous Poets - Living
Famous Poets - Most Popular
Famous Poets - Top 100
Famous Poets - Best
Famous Poets - Women
Famous Poets - African American
Famous Poets - Beat
Famous Poets - Cinquain
Famous Poets - Classical
Famous Poets - English
Famous Poets - Haiku
Famous Poets - Hindi
Famous Poets - Jewish
Famous Poets - Love
Famous Poets - Metaphysical
Famous Poets - Modern
Famous Poets - Punjabi
Famous Poets - Romantic
Famous Poets - Spanish
Famous Poets - Suicidal
Famous Poets - Urdu
Famous Poets - War

Poetry Resources

Anagrams
Bible
Book Store
Character Counter
Cliché Finder
Poetry Clichés
Common Words
Copyright Information
Grammar
Grammar Checker
Homonym
Homophones
How to Write a Poem
Lyrics
Love Poem Generator
New Poetic Forms
Plagiarism Checker
Poetics
Poetry Art
Publishing
Random Word Generator
Spell Checker
Store
What is Good Poetry?
Word Counter