Hit Me With Your Best Shot

C'mon you ole devil, take your best shot!
You kidding? That's it? Is that all you got?
I know where I'M going; He's saved me a spot
I'll warn you once more in case you forgot
You're messing with one of God's children

I'm CHOSEN, you see and that is my role
You WILL NOT BEAT ME if that is your goal
You may take my body but can't touch my soul
Go back and gnaw in your fiery red hole!
You're messing with one of God's children

I'm STRONG from the trials that I have been through
The fears and the tears from paying what's due
I've felt His wrath and His grace and love too
I've seem much tougher than the likes of you!
You're messing with one of God's children

I'm bald as a baby's naked behind
My chest is a wreck but you won't hear ME whine!
My looks ain't the book on how I'm defined
You might wanna bear this thought in your mind
You're messing with one of God's children

Go bug someone else you think you might scare!
Someday I'll sit back in my rocking chair
With those who I love, laughing at despair
If not, that's okay, I'm in my Lord’s care
You're messing with one of God's children!

*Dedicated to my daughter who is a breast cancer survivor

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 6/29/2015 7:40:00 AM
What an awesome "kickin' ass" piece, Tim! Apart from creating another big winner, this write is particularly special because of its personal connection with your daughter beating cancer! A "7" for this one! Love and extra blessings to you and your family! Pandita
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Date: 6/22/2015 1:57:00 AM
What an interesting write, love the repetition and message carried throughout. Something we could all do with taking away and thinking more on. Inspiring and full of hope and promise. Bravo.
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Date: 6/19/2015 2:28:00 AM
what an inspirational write Tim and such a creative form - So many people are affected by cancer either directly or indirectly but it is so wonderful to see this positive message - good luck in the contest:-) hugs janxx
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Date: 6/19/2015 1:37:00 AM
What an inspiration this poem is, to not only those who have experienced this terrible disease, but to all of us. I love the way you tie in your unrhymed line with the monorhymed lines. They meld together seamlessly. Congratulations on your invented poetry form! This is sure to be a winning poem Tim. 7
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Date: 6/19/2015 1:37:00 AM
I forgot to mention I am fav'ing this poem too! Hugs, Connie
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Tim Ryerson
Date: 6/19/2015 6:39:00 PM
Thanks dear lady - I am SUCH a fan of your poetry and to have you fav one of mine is a true honor!
Date: 6/18/2015 10:32:00 PM
That's telling that old devil what's what, Tim! Praise God that He protects us from the wiles of the enemy, and that He is our Shield, Our Fortress, and our Strong Protector!
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