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Hit and Run

It pours out of her A river flowing into a sea This isn't salt mixing with water This is liquid mixed with cement And it turns from pouring to drips Thick and firm with time Time.........this is time's fault If it hadn't taken long to show her the truth Truth..........this is truth's fault If it hadn't taken long to reveal itself Me.........this is my fault I was busy living with a clouded mind So optimistic always looking on the bright side Why isn't there any bright side now? Darkness........The absence of light There is no sun, no light, no bright side As my blood kiss the cement They become more acquainted Life slip from my grasps And I take my final breath My skin loses color I whisper the words I was to fearful to say "I do and I love you" Then I awake

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Date: 4/12/2025 10:18:00 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 12/13/2017 6:04:00 PM
Wow! That is swome dream you had.
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