Histrionic Human Spirit M

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Those who live an artistic life are genuinely soul-aware. It is as vital to the human spirit as is the air. Artistry, sculpture, and landscape design are creative, That's around spiritedness that pulls and is probative. Bury my heart in the wounded knee where even harm, Battered gallows have histrionic gems and charm. A ghost wrapped in a thicket of death rug toss, Eigenvector fade marble eye fabric dross Slap my lips with a cudgel, ruminant, spewing mere, Apathetic brows cursed with sin shudder with fear. I clasped my hands, viewing fake hooks and blows spare, I may sleep freely on the rope or walk as drifting in the air. Free from obscure sights, free from guilt, I translated the chain that bound my spilt. Each time the human spirit is apathetically ground, Somewhere in the cold, an answer can be found. Victim of its erratic walking and constant cold, Lost and bastard, inquiries are permitted to be trolled. You stay stoical and equanimous under a dearth, You, the human spirit, are the nucleus of the Earth. Yet, I took this mystery with me to the grave, As of now, please note that I crave to rave. I believe that fair things will win out for people, When I dared not be the one to be motile. Milk is insufficient for acts of human kindness. The stomach can churn and be mindless. Milk and whey used to derive cheddar or skim milk. There are various choices for insights ilk. Written: September 17, 2022 The Human Spirit Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Mystic Rose Rose

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Bill Baker

Date: 9/18/2022 9:40:00 AM

An exquisite poem, Lasaad. My favorite verse was , "Free from obscure sights, free from guilt, I translated the chain that bound my spilt. Each time the human spirit is apathetically ground, Somewhere in the cold, an answer can be found." Through spirit, there are answers in everything we become aware of. Your descriptions and imagery are awesome, my friend. Lovely "Hallelujah". Thanks for sharing, Bill P.S. I couldn't listening with just one, I enjoyed another 15 mins worth of the uplifting music and vocals. Thank you for sharing.

Sotto Poet
Date: 9/18/2022 2:48:00 PM

Bill, thank you so much. Your encouraging words are greatly appreciated. I'm glad you enjoy it. Thank you,

Tom Cunningham

Date: 9/18/2022 12:04:00 AM

You rose well to the challenge Lasaad, most of our creations come from within. Love that song, this is a beautiful version of it. Best of luck in the contest. Tom

Sotto Poet
Date: 9/18/2022 6:31:00 AM

Tom, thank you so much. Your encouraging words are greatly appreciated. I'm glad you enjoy it. Thank you, and I wish you a colorful and enjoyable weekend.