History of Life Pt 1

Very funny ... yet there is a deep subtlety to its truth. love it!

Well at least you'll be eating bacon from a contented hog with not stress hormones. This sends my emotions in all kinds of directions. Great write. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara

Once again creatures to represent another creatures demise? Pigs in a mud hole; fat and stubborn, who are no warriors, but to themselves. Glorious in contentment; But of course! Why not be happy with the right in front of not needed to be search gruel, no need for pain of trying. Ah, but soon bacon! Blinded by simple happiness, feeding on their easy pleasures are the very things that are helping them be later fed upon. Very interesting Haiku, could of been simply what it said or something more.

Great work, I like the last line...raul

Reminds me of some politicians and others! Happy Thnxgiving to you and yours, Marty! God bless! Love and peace, Audrey

How witty, but poignant as well, Marty! You gave me quite a laugh this morning. Delightful! Love, Carolyn

Now, that is definitely absolutely, wonderfully, great! And we all partake. The history lesson we can all understand. Brilliant, Marty. (Oh, by the way, I have a cousin named Marty. Smiling.) Sending love your way! Lovingly, Dane Ann

how sad for the pigs... but i love bacon... and thanks for your comment on my poem oh what a perfect christmas tree

Very thought provoking Haiku Marty. Here's wishing you a wonderful Holiday Season! Thanks for sharing. Love Light Patty

funny, enjoyed today!!

I love bacon Marty thanks for eading my poems

Oh Marty how cute.. I am a vegetarian but I did enjoy this meaty poem.. so fun to read... thankxxx for sharing and for your kind comments... today ... luv... Linda-Marie, P.E.P.S. "Sweetheart"