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To leave a legacy,
oh mystery,
steps of electricity.

Oh legacy,
potent jealousy,
stray little-
oh legacy 

Change in journey,
oh legacy,
your reality-

What's next?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Brown Avatar
August 9, 2012 at 10:37 AM
A well deserved win for you in the #193 contest. Congratulations Luis. Love, Carol
Johnson-Saunders Avatar
August 5, 2012 at 10:58 AM
Very clever, Luis! Congrats on your win! Love and Blessings, Rhonda
Dietrich Avatar
August 3, 2012 at 7:31 PM
Congratulations on your win in Brian's contest, Luis.
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
August 3, 2012 at 8:22 AM
Congratulations Luis xx
Brown Avatar
August 2, 2012 at 5:45 AM
Congratulations on your win in Brian's "#193" contest Luis. Love, Carol
Martinez-Rivera Avatar
August 2, 2012 at 12:32 PM
Thank you for stopping by :D
Palmer Avatar
July 6, 2012 at 9:46 AM
nice write Luis,what's next
Martinez-Rivera Avatar
July 7, 2012 at 8:46 AM
Even more wonder :)
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