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Hissing Dragon

Hissing heartshaped
Dragon draped route
Escaped ship slips

Camouflaged trap
Seaward map shown
Sails slap in breeze

Portal to sea
Songs of glee flow
From freedom's voice  

Inspired by Debbie's contest..

Copyright © Sara Kendrick | Year Posted 2014

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Jack Horne Date: 10/12/2020 5:19:00 AM love picturing this Login to Reply Sara Kendrick Date: 10/12/2020 6:14:00 AM I don't even remember what the contest was but I did not enter it. Just was inspired to write a poem. Sara

Poet Destroyer A Date: 4/5/2015 10:40:00 PM SARA, Thank you for the sweet reply to my comment. Have yourself a Happy Easter Love LINDA Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 10/11/2014 6:39:00 PM I love the last part the best. REally nice! Login to Reply

Jack Horne Date: 10/11/2014 3:14:00 PM love imagining the dragon soaring over the sea Login to Reply

Liam Mcdaid Date: 10/10/2014 12:46:00 PM most beautifully drawn dragon hiss sara smiling Login to Reply

Ravi Sathasivam Date: 10/9/2014 1:52:00 AM Excellent. Very pleasure to read this poem today. Enjoyed. TFS Login to Reply

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 10/8/2014 1:55:00 PM - Sara, a pleasure to read - Good luck in the contest (?) - Still wish you good recovery, take one day at a time ..... and relax! - oxox // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply Sara Kendrick Date: 10/8/2014 6:20:00 PM Not a contest entry..I did not get it finished in time but decided to post it anyway..Sara

Carolyn Devonshire Date: 10/8/2014 12:54:00 PM Dear Sara, You brought the dragon to life in this write. Dragons are symbolic of many things, especially for Asians, but I always think of them the way you describe -- "camouflaged traps" for sailing ships. Wonderful use of imagery, my friend. How are you feeling? I miss hearing from you and have been praying for your health. Love, carolyn Login to Reply Sara Kendrick Date: 10/8/2014 6:15:00 PM I am okay..I still haven't gotten my energy back up yet..Like I had any before..Ha!! Ha!!..Sara

Gary Bateman Date: 10/8/2014 4:45:00 AM Sara, I enjoyed your write here very much. Dragons were always a favorite of mine as a kid. Best Wishes, Gary Login to Reply Sara Kendrick Date: 10/8/2014 5:58:00 AM Gary, I wonder if there were very huge dragons on this earth at one time?..Here the dragon is a metaphor.. Thanks for the encouragment.. Sara

Poet Destroyer A Date: 10/7/2014 4:01:00 PM Hi Sara, I'm glad I stopped by today, I got a chance to read your blog of good news... :) Hope you are well, in the mean time, i see you will never lose your poetry touch.... always a fan...LINDA Login to Reply Sara Kendrick Date: 10/8/2014 5:56:00 AM Linda, Good news if I can follow through with some diet changes and a little more exercise.. Thanks for the encouragement.. Sara