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Hiss, Hiss, Hiss

A songbird serenaded trilling so sweet. It resonated thru my soul. I pulsed to the beat. Sitting by the pond a frog greeted me. I croaked back at him serendipitously. I came across a dog whose tail was wagging. I bent over to greet him, my body gently sagging. I discovered a snake concealed in the mist. I stood quietly in place and let him hiss, hiss, hiss..

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Heidi Sands

Date: 6/20/2023 12:38:00 PM

Great poem Nancy. I can see it perfectly :)

Nancy Kaufman
Date: 6/20/2023 1:01:00 PM

Thank you so much Ms. Heidi. It's always a pleasure to hear from you and I value your feedback.

Sam Kauffman

Date: 6/20/2023 10:45:00 AM

Hi Nancy! Discretion is a remarkable gift indeed and a remarkable quality. I love the way you contrasted the positive experiences of life with that of danger. This poem is so simply stated yet filled with the wisdom of life. Great metaphor. Blessings to you! I guess we all encounter snakes at one time or another. Great advice. Your title alerts us to the hidden danger!

Nancy Kaufman
Date: 6/20/2023 1:01:00 PM

Hi Sam Kauffman, with 2 f's. Kaufman is my married name though. I appreciate your thoughtful comments for this poem and your visit. Have a great rest of this day's journey.

Stephan McBride

Date: 6/20/2023 10:42:00 AM

Love it, what a joyful fun-filled day and poem: )