His Words

A whisper from full lips carried on his soft breath came.. "Indeed ...M'Lady...?" Once those words reached me My pulse quickened and my breath became shaky..... response escaped my lips as shaky as my breath to dance with his playfully for a second before drifting off to him "Indeed...Kind Sir..?" Does he know with those whispered words what he returned to me? What I thought in a deep sleep? Yet maybe it was.... How did he breathe into me awakening my essence? As if he shocked me back where I could feel the " Thump Thump" of life again My whole body was overcome with a rushing of my life force From my head to my toe where my face was flushed from a heat .. almost giggling like a school girl... Does he know what his words carried on his soft breath breathed into me? Did I affect him in any such way when my words drifted to him?..... "Yes indeed Kind Sir..!" I whispered to myself as i smiled wondering..... An older poem!

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Richard Lamoureux

Date: 11/25/2019 11:34:00 PM

I enjoyed giving this another read. Hugs Rick.

Brenda Chiri
Date: 11/25/2019 11:51:00 PM

Thank you Rick I'm really glad you found it good enough for a second read! hugs ;)

John Fleming

Date: 10/22/2019 10:24:00 AM

I have to agree with Elaine -- when she writes "you're so good at this romantic poetry". You most certainly are, Lady! In much affection Brenda :) john P.s Or should that be M'Lady? ;)

Brenda Chiri
Date: 10/22/2019 10:28:00 AM

Lol indeed kind sir!;) John your comments are even more amazing then my poetry!;) thank you so very much and hey I e had years to dream of it so I guess maybe my brain works a little overtime on the romantic stuff! All my affection!;)

Gershon Wolf

Date: 10/20/2019 11:46:00 AM

O, Brenda! You have outdone (even) yourself with these delicately penned whispered words of passion. A FAVE for me for sure. Bravo! Warmest wishes, Gershon

Brenda Chiri
Date: 10/20/2019 1:25:00 PM

Gershon thank you truly! And thank you for the fav! Lol me outdone myself!;) as long as I brought a smile to your face I like it!;)

Elaine Perrin

Date: 10/17/2019 10:28:00 AM

You’re so good at this romantic poetry, love it :-) x

Brenda Chiri
Date: 10/17/2019 1:28:00 PM

Elaine thank you so much!;)

Quoth Theraven

Date: 10/17/2019 9:43:00 AM

Brenda, Why do I see a young DiCaprio bowing to you in this poem. Got to shake this vision out of my head now. You fill in the face. -Richard

Brenda Chiri
Date: 10/17/2019 1:27:00 PM

Ahh a young DiCaprio would be heaven lol! Thank you Richard!;)

Gershon Wolf

Date: 10/16/2019 11:31:00 AM

Wow! I am breathless. This is just magical, Brenda. I'm blown away. Thanks for reposting this!! Warmest wishes, Gershon (soup mail, please)

Brenda Chiri
Date: 10/16/2019 11:52:00 AM

Gershon thank you so much! Your help and words are a pleasure to read and so glad you enjoyed this!;)

Swetha Vangaveti

Date: 10/16/2019 10:30:00 AM

My lips took a curve :)

Brenda Chiri
Date: 10/16/2019 11:51:00 AM

Ahhh so glad that they did!;) thank you!;)

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 10/16/2019 8:38:00 AM

So glad you reposted this beauty. What a great read to start my day.

Brenda Chiri
Date: 10/16/2019 11:50:00 AM

I am so glad that it was the read you may not have expected but was glad to find Rick!;) Thank you!;)

Sandra Adams

Date: 10/15/2019 2:39:00 PM

Beautiful penning and I thought here your muse was back again and then I saw your note that it was an older post. Still a worthy poem to repost. I enjoyed the read :)

Brenda Chiri
Date: 10/15/2019 3:02:00 PM

Thank you Sandy! Yea my muse is a bit silent of late but she has been poking st me so I'm curious as to what she wants to write!;)

Chris Green

Date: 10/15/2019 1:50:00 PM

Such a creative piece of writing that inspires smiles all around. Nicely done Brenda.

Brenda Chiri
Date: 10/15/2019 3:00:00 PM

Thanks so very much chris! I truly appreciate it!;)