His Whispering Vow

In the quiet of my soul, with faith I pray Loud susurrations of praise delight my mind As I look to the Lord to direct my way Murmurs of love caress the verses I find Descending from above in a soothing spell Trembles my heart in a cacophonous grind A peek into heaven's loveliness does tell This aching heart that hope can always be found For with us who are saved, the Spirit does dwell With God's guidance, songs take over joy unbound Grateful for all the blessings we enjoy now Looking forward to His faithful silent sound Filled with quietude, to Almighty I bow Love is clamorous in His whispering vow Jan 27th, 2021
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Y. Avatar
February 11, 2021 at 8:26 AM
Hi Jo, Congratulations on your winning write. It was well deserved. Have a great day:-) Alexis
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February 11, 2021 at 1:40 AM
Congrats on your win. God bless you and thank you so much for entering this gorgeous write. Love, Gina
Dietrich Avatar
January 28, 2021 at 10:34 AM
wow, that last line is really cool image!! Well done, Jo
May Avatar
January 28, 2021 at 5:04 AM
Praying for guidance, and we are thankful for all His blessings...Beautiful write Jo
Trifiatis Avatar
January 27, 2021 at 7:47 AM
Profound, inspiring, and uplifting poem, dearest Jo! Hugs xxx Good luck!
Pandit Avatar
January 27, 2021 at 7:20 AM
Much inspiration in these verses of faith peeking into heaven's loveliness. Superbly done in this difficult to execute form, Jo. Your poem whispers of profound blessings.
Y. Avatar
January 27, 2021 at 7:04 AM
Hi Jo, A well-written inspirational poem filled with good content and rhymes. Your faith shines bright from start to finish. Best wishes in the contest.Have a great day:-) Alexis
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January 27, 2021 at 3:15 AM
Great rhyme scheme and very inspirational. Best for a win. ~~
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