His Whisper

He left a whisper on my pillow
Lingers with me night by night
Whispers to me, he is with me
Every moment of my life
I close my eyes only to see
Him standing there in front of me
I reach to touch, but I can't feel
Knowing now that he's not real.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Agustin Avatar
June 11, 2024 at 5:02 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
A   Avatar
February 13, 2016 at 10:30 PM
katherine, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA
Solis Avatar
December 7, 2012 at 6:51 PM
*this
Solis Avatar
December 7, 2012 at 6:49 PM
I love his write.
Szymanowicz Avatar
December 3, 2012 at 1:39 PM
I am so flattered. Thank you for featuring this on the soup home page. I am very inspired by all the talented wonderful writers on this site. ~Fire~
Austin Avatar
December 3, 2012 at 11:40 AM
Life is real, but hold on to this guy. He's your imagination. Congrats on the selection. daver
Szymanowicz Avatar
December 3, 2012 at 1:55 PM
Thank you Daver
A   Avatar
December 2, 2012 at 7:41 PM
Katherine Szymanowicz ,,, congratulations with your poem featured on the soup home page... love it~ LINDA
Szymanowicz Avatar
December 3, 2012 at 1:55 PM
Thank you!
Muthoni Avatar
November 15, 2012 at 12:46 AM
Nice work
Jubenville Avatar
November 13, 2012 at 5:36 PM
Katherine, very well done, nice work, Ellie
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November 12, 2012 at 8:53 AM
BTW Welcome to the Soup
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November 12, 2012 at 8:53 AM
wow deep piece you have penned here... very good.. Michael
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