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His Very Beautiful Poetry -Renga

~His Very Beautiful Poetry~
(Renga)



His beautiful poems
Give me  so much joy to read
They ooze of romance

Inside them there's so much love
Never get tired reading them

Always within you
Flying without wings I soar
Essence of a rose

In your pages I can dream Love
Your words warmly whispering.


Dorian Petersen Potter
aka ladydp2000
copyright@2015


June.9.2015
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Andresen Avatar
June 12, 2015 at 5:40 AM
- A beautiful and sweet poem, Dorian - Happy weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Petersen Potter Avatar
June 13, 2015 at 8:55 PM
Thank you ever so kindly Anne-Lise,for stopping by and commenting so beautifully on my poem!Very much appreciate it my very dear friend.Sending you love n' prayers.Wishing you a very lovely day!In his light!God bless you!:)Hugs!D.
Flannery Avatar
June 11, 2015 at 2:31 PM
Excellent piece Dorian. I enjoyed reading your work. Take care!
Petersen Potter Avatar
June 16, 2015 at 9:58 PM
Thank you ever so kindly Vincent,for stopping by and commenting so beautifully on my poem!Very much appreciate it dear friend.Wishing you a very lovely day!In his light!God bless you!:)D
Sathasivam Avatar
June 11, 2015 at 1:31 AM
Excellent. Beautiful write. Enjoyed reading it. Tfs
Petersen Potter Avatar
June 13, 2015 at 8:53 PM
Thank you ever so kindly Ravi,for stopping by and commenting so beautifully on my poem!Wishing you a very lovely day!In his light!God bless you!:)D
Pinet Avatar
June 9, 2015 at 11:19 AM
The words are magical and beautifully expressed in a sea of swirling phrases that dance upon the tongue. Emile.
Petersen Potter Avatar
June 13, 2015 at 8:49 PM
Thank you ever so kindly Emile,for stopping by and commenting so beautifully on my poem.Wishing you a very lovely day!In his light!God Bless you!:)D.
Allison Avatar
June 9, 2015 at 2:26 AM
Such beautiful imagery and images Dorian -so gentle and romantic - a 7 from me:-) Hugs jan x
Petersen Potter Avatar
June 13, 2015 at 8:44 PM
Thank you ever so kindly Jan,for stopping by and commenting so beautifully on my poem.Very much appreciate everything dear friend.Wishing you a very lovely day!In his light!God Bless you!:)Hugs!D
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