His Touch Embraced My Soul

I was floating in darkness, searching for the truth Not quite believing what I'd been told in my youth Lotus bud, unable to open in full bloom fearing without light, I would wither in my gloom Then I read the righteousness of God's Holy Word Sentiments within my heart were aroused and stirred I was blossoming like a Lotus in moonlight Saved by contrition, petals unfurled in pure white A flower nurtured by His own merciful hands no more searching; an enlightened one understands the divine glory of God and His clement grace I felt his touch upon my soul as an embrace Spiritual elation rid me of my grief Trusting in His Word nourished my faith and belief December 29th, 2020 Lotus Of My Heart Contest Sponsor: Mystic Rose Rose
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Krutsinger Avatar
December 31, 2020 at 9:28 PM
Spiritually magnifico!
Logan Avatar
January 1, 2021 at 3:37 AM
Humbly, I thank you, Caren.
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December 30, 2020 at 10:51 PM
This is delightful and the imagery inspiring.
Logan Avatar
December 31, 2020 at 6:34 PM
Thank you very much, Christopher.
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December 30, 2020 at 5:19 AM
"I was floating in darkness, searching for the truth" I love this powerful line, you really started off with a punch. This describes the first half of my life in one line.
Logan Avatar
December 30, 2020 at 1:24 PM
If that is so, Mark, then you are blessed in the second half of your life. Thanks so much.
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December 30, 2020 at 3:51 AM
Jenna the sonnet is simply amazing, such a wonderful talented poet, you are a star. A fabulous contender for the contest... Belle
Logan Avatar
December 30, 2020 at 1:24 PM
and you are so very kind and generous with your compliments. Thank you, Belle.
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December 29, 2020 at 9:05 PM
Very moving spiritual poem, Jenna, the sponsor will love it, a lady that is very spiritually guided. Thank you for visiting my poem. Happy New Year my friend. Hugs Eve
Logan Avatar
December 30, 2020 at 1:23 PM
Hi Eve, and thank you for your kind words about my lines. Happy New Year to you, too.
Pandit Avatar
December 29, 2020 at 4:04 PM
Beautiful ode to a splendorous flower, Jenna--enjoyed your spiritual write.
Logan Avatar
December 30, 2020 at 1:23 PM
Thanks so very much for your sweet thoughts, Vijay.
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December 29, 2020 at 2:03 PM
Great inspiring and uplifting piece Jenna, I love your line, then I read the righteousness of God's holy word' , indeed true transformation! Have a blessed 2021, blessings,Gordon
Logan Avatar
December 30, 2020 at 1:22 PM
Thank you very much, Gordon. God has blessed me with knowledge of Him. I hope 2021 will be good to you.
Poetry Avatar
December 29, 2020 at 11:22 AM
Splendid work my dear poetess, from the bottom of your heart blossomed all pureness of your soul in genuine faith... salute alkas
Logan Avatar
December 29, 2020 at 1:21 PM
Many thanks for your kind praises, Alkas.
Kendrick Avatar
December 29, 2020 at 9:32 AM
Reads like a good contender for this contest. I enjoyed reading the depth of the work. It is not only a descriptive and emotive work but also spiritually based. Thank you for dropping by my page. Sara
Logan Avatar
December 29, 2020 at 1:21 PM
Thank you very much, Sara, and you're welcome. I enjoyed reading you.
Cunningham Avatar
December 29, 2020 at 7:57 AM
So many float in the darkness until they see the light of his word, an awakening of the soul. Good luck in the contest. Well written Jenna. Tom
Logan Avatar
December 29, 2020 at 8:40 AM
Thank you for your awareness and generous comments, Tom.
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