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His Touch Embraced My Soul

I was floating in darkness, searching for the truth Not quite believing what I'd been told in my youth Lotus bud, unable to open in full bloom fearing without light, I would wither in my gloom Then I read the righteousness of God's Holy Word Sentiments within my heart were aroused and stirred I was blossoming like a Lotus in moonlight Saved by contrition, petals unfurled in pure white A flower nurtured by His own merciful hands no more searching; an enlightened one understands the divine glory of God and His clement grace I felt his touch upon my soul as an embrace Spiritual elation rid me of my grief Trusting in His Word nourished my faith and belief December 29th, 2020 Lotus Of My Heart Contest Sponsor: Mystic Rose Rose

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Date: 12/31/2020 9:28:00 PM
Spiritually magnifico!
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Jenna Logan
Date: 1/1/2021 3:37:00 AM
Humbly, I thank you, Caren.
Date: 12/30/2020 10:51:00 PM
This is delightful and the imagery inspiring.
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Jenna Logan
Date: 12/31/2020 6:34:00 PM
Thank you very much, Christopher.
Date: 12/30/2020 5:19:00 AM
"I was floating in darkness, searching for the truth" I love this powerful line, you really started off with a punch. This describes the first half of my life in one line.
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Jenna Logan
Date: 12/30/2020 1:24:00 PM
If that is so, Mark, then you are blessed in the second half of your life. Thanks so much.
Date: 12/30/2020 3:51:00 AM
Jenna the sonnet is simply amazing, such a wonderful talented poet, you are a star. A fabulous contender for the contest... Belle
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Jenna Logan
Date: 12/30/2020 1:24:00 PM
and you are so very kind and generous with your compliments. Thank you, Belle.
Date: 12/29/2020 9:05:00 PM
Very moving spiritual poem, Jenna, the sponsor will love it, a lady that is very spiritually guided. Thank you for visiting my poem. Happy New Year my friend. Hugs Eve
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Jenna Logan
Date: 12/30/2020 1:23:00 PM
Hi Eve, and thank you for your kind words about my lines. Happy New Year to you, too.
Date: 12/29/2020 4:04:00 PM
Beautiful ode to a splendorous flower, Jenna--enjoyed your spiritual write.
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Jenna Logan
Date: 12/30/2020 1:23:00 PM
Thanks so very much for your sweet thoughts, Vijay.
Date: 12/29/2020 2:03:00 PM
Great inspiring and uplifting piece Jenna, I love your line, then I read the righteousness of God's holy word' , indeed true transformation! Have a blessed 2021, blessings,Gordon
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Jenna Logan
Date: 12/30/2020 1:22:00 PM
Thank you very much, Gordon. God has blessed me with knowledge of Him. I hope 2021 will be good to you.
Date: 12/29/2020 11:22:00 AM
Splendid work my dear poetess, from the bottom of your heart blossomed all pureness of your soul in genuine faith... salute alkas
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Jenna Logan
Date: 12/29/2020 1:21:00 PM
Many thanks for your kind praises, Alkas.
Date: 12/29/2020 9:32:00 AM
Reads like a good contender for this contest. I enjoyed reading the depth of the work. It is not only a descriptive and emotive work but also spiritually based. Thank you for dropping by my page. Sara
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Jenna Logan
Date: 12/29/2020 1:21:00 PM
Thank you very much, Sara, and you're welcome. I enjoyed reading you.
Date: 12/29/2020 7:57:00 AM
So many float in the darkness until they see the light of his word, an awakening of the soul. Good luck in the contest. Well written Jenna. Tom
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Jenna Logan
Date: 12/29/2020 8:40:00 AM
Thank you for your awareness and generous comments, Tom.

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