His Touch

His loving arms reach out to me
Touched by love, he helps to make me whole
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Dietrich Avatar
January 4, 2011 at 4:47 PM
ps Or say "he helps to make me whole" then keep your title the same. Just a suggestion.It was the same person in both lines, right?
Dietrich Avatar
January 4, 2011 at 4:46 PM
Sharon, this is great. If the subject of line one is same as line two, which I take it to be, you should say "your" in the first word of the poem. Luv, Andrea
Neels Avatar
November 22, 2010 at 9:13 PM
This is so true Sharon, sometimes that is all we wish for a "simple touch" .. I really enjoyed this write of yours this morning, love Wilma
Fraser Avatar
November 22, 2010 at 2:49 PM
Soup Mail for you Sharon....:)
Fraser Avatar
November 21, 2010 at 10:26 AM
The touch of a loved one can mean so much Sharon, nice little shortie >> James :)
Kendrick Avatar
November 19, 2010 at 3:46 PM
Good one..I am glad that I chose this one to read tonight..Sara
Ammutlinra Avatar
November 19, 2010 at 2:57 PM
Very beautiful'(LIN~RA)
A   Avatar
November 19, 2010 at 2:48 PM
Love will always reach out to one,, love it Sharon,..p.d.
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November 19, 2010 at 2:46 PM
All said in two wonderful lines...Beautiful Shar...Love Michael
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