His Touch

His loving arms reach out to me Touched by love, he helps to make me whole

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/4/2011 4:47:00 PM

ps Or say "he helps to make me whole" then keep your title the same. Just a suggestion.It was the same person in both lines, right?

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/4/2011 4:46:00 PM

Sharon, this is great. If the subject of line one is same as line two, which I take it to be, you should say "your" in the first word of the poem. Luv, Andrea

Wilma Neels

Date: 11/22/2010 9:13:00 PM

This is so true Sharon, sometimes that is all we wish for a "simple touch" .. I really enjoyed this write of yours this morning, love Wilma

James Fraser

Date: 11/22/2010 2:49:00 PM

Soup Mail for you Sharon....:)

James Fraser

Date: 11/21/2010 10:26:00 AM

The touch of a loved one can mean so much Sharon, nice little shortie >> James :)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/19/2010 3:46:00 PM

Good one..I am glad that I chose this one to read tonight..Sara

Hathor Ammutlinra

Date: 11/19/2010 2:57:00 PM

Very beautiful'(LIN~RA)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 11/19/2010 2:48:00 PM

Love will always reach out to one,, love it Sharon,..p.d.

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 11/19/2010 2:46:00 PM

All said in two wonderful lines...Beautiful Shar...Love Michael