Gershon Wolf Poet Rhyme

His Sweet Tune

A robin awakened me cheerily
   as I sat up in bed
Tweeting his sweet tune
   that now plays in my head

And when I retired
   at the end of the day
To the tune of the robin
   soft to sleep did I lay

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Brenda Chiri September 24, 2019 at 5:31 AM Ok the good night soupers too! Loved it Gershon!;) Gershon Wolf September 24, 2019 at 10:34 AM I'm trying to shuffle the deck a bit here, Brenda. Thank you for your support!! :) gw

Heidi Sands September 23, 2019 at 9:28 PM Very sweet Gershon. I love this :) Gershon Wolf September 24, 2019 at 10:33 AM Thank you for letting me know, Heidi, and so glad you like this one. ~ Tweet, tweet...gw

Bobby May September 23, 2019 at 6:32 PM Like Ilene said my friend it is very lovely and soothing to the mind! Gershon Wolf September 23, 2019 at 7:43 PM So pleased that you're pleased with this one, Bobby. Best wishes, Gershon

Ilene Bauer September 23, 2019 at 6:06 PM this is lovely, gershon! Gershon Wolf September 23, 2019 at 7:27 PM So glad you like it, Ilene! Let's whistle a happy tune! :) gw

Chris Green September 23, 2019 at 4:13 PM A very nice melodic piece of writing that is soothing and peaceful. Gershon Wolf September 23, 2019 at 4:39 PM Chris, your kind words are deeply appreciated. Best wishes always, Gershon