His Shore Beyond

new dawn upon us
light reaches my humble heart
lead me to Your Shores
.... For Raul's Contest
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Sweetheart Avatar
December 10, 2009 at 4:11 PM
Oh this one is a "goodie" Jimbo... I too kept getting kicked off posting comments on both soup site and blog site.. must be on "overload" tonight... blessings.. luv.. "Sweetheart"
George   Avatar
November 26, 2009 at 11:43 PM
WOW! Great Haiku, James. best wishes in Raul's contest. Love, lainie
Freeman Avatar
November 25, 2009 at 8:56 PM
Sacred Haiku, James. Good job. Sincerely, Moses
Owens Avatar
November 24, 2009 at 10:02 PM
Beautiful Haiku...Enjoyed reading...Good luck in the contest...Marty
Peranteau Avatar
November 24, 2009 at 5:14 PM
This is a great Hiaku Mr. Goff,..I love when they make sence,..as yours do !!! Great write ! james
Canady Avatar
November 23, 2009 at 7:04 PM
Absolutely Sublime Jimbo ... Absolutely ... MoonBee
Chircop Avatar
November 23, 2009 at 1:43 PM
SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO Beautifullllllllllllllllllllllllllllllll
Delacroix Avatar
November 22, 2009 at 9:04 PM
Awesome! Jim! Loved this Haiku very much. Nice concept. Good luck on the contest. Thanks for sharing and thank you for your nice comments on my poem, "Awakening Dawn" and a Happy Thanksgiving to you and yours. Love and Blessings, Caroline.
Culverhouse Avatar
November 22, 2009 at 11:29 AM
beautiful!
Devonshire Avatar
November 21, 2009 at 8:19 PM
Your faith shines in this write, Jim. Excellent haiku. Best wishes for success in the contest! Love you, Carolyn
Kendrick Avatar
November 21, 2009 at 5:40 PM
Interesting take on the picture which should do well in the contest. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
Sheart Avatar
November 21, 2009 at 5:30 PM
A awesome Haiku dear Jimbo! Good luck in Raul's contest! Smile. Here's wishing you and yours a wonderful Thanksgiving and Christmas Season too! Love Light Patty
Culverhouse Avatar
November 21, 2009 at 5:28 PM
nicely penned, good luck in the contest!!
Sweetheart Avatar
November 21, 2009 at 5:20 PM
Expressively beautiful and inspirational haiku from Jimbo like no other can write.. I can see it all now... u are blessed... luv.. thankxxx for your comments on my poetry as always ... encouraging... Linda-Marie, P.E.P.S. "Sweetheart"
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