His Sacerfice

He suffered the wrath laying his life on the line as he accepted our mistakes one more time. Every one stood staring at him as they drove nails into his skin. Never saying a word, as he died there on those boards. Wouldn't he be proud of all the people who are thankful now?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Mjelde Avatar
February 4, 2012 at 5:48 PM
great poem cory! I've looked on some of your poems and they are great! xoxo love Laila
Cooper Avatar
February 3, 2012 at 7:07 PM
another good one cory, great write.
Sweetheart Avatar
February 1, 2012 at 2:37 PM
wow cxory a magnificent piece inspiring all to recall the great sacrifice.. a wonderful write my friend.. so happy to hear from u and know all is well.. am still doing therapy three times a week.. oh lots of pain but will stick it out..so I can type again..luv.. take care buddy..
Fitzgerald Avatar
January 27, 2012 at 9:02 PM
Congratulations Cory on such a fine write and deserved win , Hugs Declan xx
Arno Avatar
January 27, 2012 at 6:36 PM
Congratulations on your winning entry. Good job. Best regards, Jon
Onclaud Avatar
January 26, 2012 at 12:52 AM
pressed for time but read your superb piece, cory .. a generic message of delightful cheers for your great win!..:) huggs!
Dietrich Avatar
January 25, 2012 at 6:11 PM
Congratulations on your win, Cory. LONG TIME no SEE!!!
Devonshire Avatar
January 25, 2012 at 11:44 AM
How lucky we all are that Christ made this sacrifice on our behalf, Cory. Very moving poem! Congratulations on your win. Love, Carolyn
Quigley Avatar
January 25, 2012 at 9:52 AM
Congratulations Cory. A very philosophical poem.
Brown Avatar
January 25, 2012 at 6:02 AM
Congratulations on the win in Brian's "UPTO Fourteen" contest Cory. Love, Carol
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January 22, 2012 at 8:20 PM
Dear Cory, always... a pleasure to stop bya very lovely poem.. thank you for sharing your poem,.. always,..p.d.
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January 22, 2012 at 3:47 PM
True words. Great share. Thank you. D
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