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His Queen

.............................They looked. She saw him, He saw her, In the morning light of the early Summer. And when their sights interlocked, was when they could barely walk. For their youth was just new, as the morning dew, that soaked their hands and feet. Crawl turned to run, when their youth was barely due. As the meadows rang and the crickets sang, when the sun began to set, Their abbey of golden grass did wake. Together they reigned, in the shining cloak, of their arcane kingdom's vein. His hand in Her hand, they pranced and ran, in the dyed riches of the August sun. As the time came, when day was lame, and night was out to walk, they said their byes, and lullabyes, and went to sleep again. Years go by, their dreams come to pass, of their sun-soaked realm and streams. He grows tall, kind and serene, like a King is meant to be. With eyes that spark and a loving heart, He seeks,"The One for me". She grows with grace, as her stepping pace, is that of an angel's gleam. Her golden hair, glowing eyes, skin of softest creme, reflects within her every step, like in their earliest dream; Her smile could bring to the knees about anything that breathes, including a childhood King. So He brings her to the meadow, where their friendship first entwined. And asked Her to be His Queen, of another kind.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 11/20/2009 4:57:00 PM
so lovely! Light & Love
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Date: 3/10/2009 7:35:00 PM
Beautiful images, Alyssa! Like the "shape" of the poem, too. Carolyn
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Date: 3/10/2009 6:05:00 PM
This is a verry lovely poem my sista, verry good job, verry good love stranger
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Date: 3/9/2009 2:22:00 PM
Hi Dear Heart, This is magical in content and shape. Well done! You are a great poet. Love, Elaine
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Date: 3/3/2009 10:02:00 PM
Alyssa that was very beautiful poetry and the shape is excellent considering that it was obviously very difficult to do - excellent in every way - God Bless you, MJ
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Date: 3/3/2009 8:43:00 AM
This is a very lovely shape poem in imagery tone and flow. A beautifully written story of love. I thank you for sharing the read. God's Love and Many Blessings, Always, Adell
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Date: 3/2/2009 9:45:00 AM
You did a wonderful job with this shape poem. I love the line ...and night was out to walk ... brings a sense of romance and provokes thought as well. Well done - Jason
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Date: 3/2/2009 7:59:00 AM
Excellent use of the form, an oft told tale reborn. Light & Love Debbie
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Date: 3/2/2009 6:08:00 AM
This is brilliant work my friend.. the shape is outstanding and you have some gem of lines in this well written piece..so romantic..and dreamy..wonderfully expressed. Chris.
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Date: 3/2/2009 4:29:00 AM
This is such a romantic piece. Like a dream I recently had. You tell the story so vividly and the heart just brings it all together. Smiles from Lolita
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