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His Presence

His presence The sweetness of his presence Brings an aroma of sheer pleasance The merry tune he sings Happiness to me it brings The golden drums he beat Brings a rhythm to my feet The glitter in his eyes The sparkle of his smile Makes the whole world seem Like just a mile Him being around Brings my heart to a pound A pounding of love, Of passion, of care Wherever he is I'll always be there If not in person Then in soul, and in heart From him never Shall I ever part.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 1/22/2009 7:16:00 AM
Sweet Write Its really cute :)
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Date: 12/18/2008 11:04:00 PM
This is beautiful, Maryam! It is wnderful to feel this way and you expressed yourself so well. Great write! Happy Holidays and thanks for your comments! Love Robin
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Date: 12/10/2008 9:09:00 AM
I feel like this alot about someone...
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Date: 12/1/2008 4:55:00 AM
hey maryam, lovely poem this is. keep writing and keep rocking...take care.. AMAAN!
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Date: 11/27/2008 5:08:00 PM
Beautiful poem that express love and understanding of one's self very well. The poem flows well and the voice speaks clearly.
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Date: 11/25/2008 4:00:00 PM
that is so beautiful i really like it you are really good at putting words together
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