Brenda Chiri Poet Rhyme

His Pain

Your pain is deep
Invading your dreams
No peace to keep
Unrelenting screams

When you close your eyes
The pictures of the pain
Become unrelenting lies
As they all attack your brain

Prayers for a ceasefire
Never to come about
Makes life feel dire
Showing nothing but doubt

Know I am not that far
I'm here for only you
Let me kiss your scars
I'll show you what's true

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Caren Krutsinger December 5, 2019 at 5:50 AM Well done. "let me kiss your scars - I'll show you what's true." Sometimes the scars make us into a much better poet. Smile. Brenda Chiri January 4, 2020 at 3:20 AM Thank you Caren;)

Gershon Wolf December 2, 2019 at 7:43 PM 'Kiss those scars' -- such a lovely sentiment… Kisses help: It's the love behind them... Remember Mom's?! Cheers, Gershon Brenda Chiri December 3, 2019 at 8:08 AM Ah see my mom never kissed me nor showed me love not once in my life! But it's cool it made me into who I am and I think I'm not that bad!;) thank you and yes kisses are great!;) bigger smile!;)

John Hamilton December 1, 2019 at 9:29 AM A very empathetic write, nice to know there are people out there...that care. Very touching write! Brenda Chiri December 3, 2019 at 8:06 AM Thank you John! But I thought all cared but looking sound I guess maybe not as many as I thought! I do have a habit of picking up on someone's feelings but I don't pay attention to ones I don't know it is draining at times!;) again thank you so much!;)

Na Na November 30, 2019 at 2:44 PM Hi Brenda very nice one. Always good count on and also depend on a friend and a friend to count and depend on you. Thanks for sharing this Brenda Chiri November 30, 2019 at 3:34 PM That's so true thank you Gregory!;)

Pace Ink-U-Script November 30, 2019 at 2:21 PM I needed to read this...it’s good to have friends that you can depend on. What’s life without them?! Brenda Chiri November 30, 2019 at 3:34 PM That's true but seems I kive mine without them but hey made for good poetry! Thank G!;)

Ts Poetry November 30, 2019 at 2:01 PM Good friends are there to help when there is pain and anguish Brenda Chiri November 30, 2019 at 3:33 PM I wish I knew where mine were! Lol but it's cool I will always be there for my friends! Thanks T!;)