His Pain

Your pain is deep Invading your dreams No peace to keep Unrelenting screams When you close your eyes The pictures of the pain Become unrelenting lies As they all attack your brain Prayers for a ceasefire Never to come about Makes life feel dire Showing nothing but doubt Know I am not that far I'm here for only you Let me kiss your scars I'll show you what's true

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Caren Krutsinger

Date: 12/5/2019 5:50:00 AM

Well done. "let me kiss your scars - I'll show you what's true." Sometimes the scars make us into a much better poet. Smile.

Brenda Chiri
Date: 1/4/2020 3:20:00 AM

Thank you Caren;)

Gershon Wolf

Date: 12/2/2019 7:43:00 PM

'Kiss those scars' -- such a lovely sentiment… Kisses help: It's the love behind them... Remember Mom's?! Cheers, Gershon

Brenda Chiri
Date: 12/3/2019 8:08:00 AM

Ah see my mom never kissed me nor showed me love not once in my life! But it's cool it made me into who I am and I think I'm not that bad!;) thank you and yes kisses are great!;) bigger smile!;)

John Hamilton

Date: 12/1/2019 9:29:00 AM

A very empathetic write, nice to know there are people out there...that care. Very touching write!

Brenda Chiri
Date: 12/3/2019 8:06:00 AM

Thank you John! But I thought all cared but looking sound I guess maybe not as many as I thought! I do have a habit of picking up on someone's feelings but I don't pay attention to ones I don't know it is draining at times!;) again thank you so much!;)

Na Na

Date: 11/30/2019 2:44:00 PM

Hi Brenda very nice one. Always good count on and also depend on a friend and a friend to count and depend on you. Thanks for sharing this

Brenda Chiri
Date: 11/30/2019 3:34:00 PM

That's so true thank you Gregory!;)

Pace Ink-U-Script

Date: 11/30/2019 2:21:00 PM

I needed to read this...it’s good to have friends that you can depend on. What’s life without them?!

Brenda Chiri
Date: 11/30/2019 3:34:00 PM

That's true but seems I kive mine without them but hey made for good poetry! Thank G!;)

Ts Poetry

Date: 11/30/2019 2:01:00 PM

Good friends are there to help when there is pain and anguish

Brenda Chiri
Date: 11/30/2019 3:33:00 PM

I wish I knew where mine were! Lol but it's cool I will always be there for my friends! Thanks T!;)