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My first son I named after myself, as I was named after my father too. When he was born...I cried tears of joy. :)

Premiere Contest WinnerHis Name Is My Name-Sq

As I pace the corridor, I cry tears of joy
Patiently, I await...is it a girl, is it a boy 
My wife went into labor, at a quarter to four 
I cry tears of joy, as I pace the corridor 

Her hand in mine, as I sit by her side 
It's my child too...must go along for the ride 
Contractions speed, it's almost that time 
As I sit by her side, her hand in mine 

Push said the nurse, tears in our eyes 
Harder and harder, she pushes...she cries
She shouts "Is this what they mean-for better for worse" 
Tears in our eyes, push said the nurse 

Darling, we have a newborn son...we've been blessed 
So warm, so soft...his breath as he rests 
My love, my wife, look what's been done 
We've been blessed...Darling, we have a newborn son


Swap Meet Poetry Contest 
Sponsor Carol Connell 
3/20/2019
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Radhakrishna Avatar
February 9, 2020 at 1:50 AM
Beautiful piece of work! You describe the situation so well! Been through that like many!
Messina Avatar
February 9, 2020 at 8:20 AM
Hi Krish, thanks for your kind words and for reading this one. One of my personal fave's.
Haight Avatar
May 13, 2019 at 12:00 PM
Charles, a belated congratulations on your well-deserved Trophy win for this excellent poem! Sandra :)
Ravidas Avatar
May 9, 2019 at 5:06 PM
Why am I not surprised I lost this contest? A wonderful poem, Charles.
Agustin Avatar
May 1, 2019 at 9:05 AM
Wow! Congrats! thanks for sharing not just your talent, but you joy as a Dad. God bless you.
Messina Avatar
May 1, 2019 at 9:59 AM
Thank you so much, Beata. Means a lot :) Blessings
Canerdy Avatar
April 30, 2019 at 4:46 PM
CONGRATS on your well-deserved win, Charles! So sweet! Janice
Messina Avatar
May 1, 2019 at 6:24 AM
Thank you so much, Janice :)
Awtry Avatar
April 30, 2019 at 4:05 PM
Congratulations on such joy and on your trophy honors! Enjoyed this sweet write.
Messina Avatar
May 1, 2019 at 6:27 AM
Thank you so muck P.S. much appreciated :)
Michael Avatar
March 23, 2019 at 6:32 AM
You and your generation will live one...Hope Charles junior continues...A poem to reflect....
Pandit Avatar
March 21, 2019 at 7:19 AM
Your poem flows so flawlessly with the story line..a wonderful theme you chose for this splendid swap quatrain, Charles.
Romios Avatar
March 21, 2019 at 5:28 AM
Hi Charles, Wonderful poem exposes your beautiful heart and your love of life. Love, Panagiota
Proxenos Avatar
March 21, 2019 at 2:40 AM
Charles you made me cry - I feel the love between the three of you and know how blessed you both feel or felt, at the birth of your wonder, your son. Beautiful poem Charles. Poetry hugs, Jennifer.
Messina Avatar
March 21, 2019 at 5:40 AM
Hi Jennifer, I am sorry to have made you cry my dear. Yes, this was certainly true. Thank you for your beautiful comment. Poetry hugs, Charlie. :)
Proxenos Avatar
March 21, 2019 at 2:42 AM
If for poetry contest or real, an awesome poem Hugs, Jennifer.
Mupfumbu Avatar
March 20, 2019 at 10:48 PM
beautiful ink!!
Messina Avatar
March 21, 2019 at 5:41 AM
Thank you, Pardy. I appreciate your visit. Charlie
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