His Mistake

My brother turned 23 the night he made his mistake.
Both of them were looking for a fight.
You hit her with a door and chased her with a knife.
Police found you driving loaded that night.

You were stuffed and cuffed on the spot.
She was terrified of what you did.
Stripping you of your rights,
behind bars is where you sit.

Originally your original charge was 60 years,
your looking at 12 years  instead.
Every letter I write another piece of me dies.
Night after night I lay in my bed.

Dreaming of the day when this will all end.
Missing you in every way,
Never let your memories fade away.
We will be together again someday.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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May 26, 2011 at 6:58 PM
Wow. Thank you for sharing Cory. That is sad that it happened. I pray that God blesses you.
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May 26, 2011 at 11:42 AM
When people have too much to drink, they do things that are way out of their norm, Cory. I can understand your reluctance to enter this in the contest, but the poem is so well written. Tomorrow night I leave for a fishing vacation and will be away for a week. Have a great time while I'm away. Love, Carolyn
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May 26, 2011 at 10:58 AM
I am sitting here reading some very amazing poems today Cory. I am glad yours was among them. Have a wonderful day full of love and joy. Love, Carol
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May 26, 2011 at 10:41 AM
A sad write Cory but you did it beautifully.. I can feel the love for your brother seep through your words.. Thank you for your comment on my write today ;) tc Wilma
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May 26, 2011 at 7:39 AM
funny how true stories resonate so much better in poetry cory.. sad story but can relate with the piece I wrote on my two cousins which is also a true tale.. good luck in the contest... hope they all learned their lessons... hope u have a great holiday weekend ..be safe luv..
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May 26, 2011 at 6:03 AM
wow! Cory, I'm sad to hear this. My youngest brother just got out. I missed him. But, for me at least in there he was safe. Thanks for sharing~luv*SKAT
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