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His Kitschy Ways

The lover he lures with his kitschy ways Tawdry, vulgar, unfaithful… Reflection of himself *April 4, 2017, Broken Wings’ Kimo Contest entry.

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Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 5/9/2017 5:33:00 PM

Oh boy....that last line says it all! Wonderful! ; )

Paul Callus

Date: 4/7/2017 11:52:00 AM

Pleased to be back with congratulations, Carolyn...very much deserved! Hugs // paul

Sara Chansarkar

Date: 4/7/2017 9:39:00 AM

kitschy lovers:) its brilliant Carolyn!

Joseph May

Date: 4/7/2017 8:52:00 AM

Congrats on a fine win Carolyn

Constance La France

Date: 4/7/2017 8:35:00 AM

Carolyn congratulations on your win in my contest with this wonderful Kimo. I love it.

Teddy Kimathi

Date: 4/7/2017 7:26:00 AM

Great imagery!! Congrats, Carolyn, for your WIN with this fine piece!! ;-)

John Michaels

Date: 4/7/2017 2:23:00 AM

Nice write! Congratulations on your win! Regards, John.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/6/2017 9:55:00 PM

way to go in the contest, sweetie. CONGRATULATIONS.

Paul Callus

Date: 4/6/2017 2:06:00 PM

Each to his own, I would say, Carolyn! I would run in the opposite direction were I to meet someone like that! So far this is the only 'kitschy' entry that I have come across. Hugs // paul

Tim Smith

Date: 4/4/2017 9:22:00 PM

Not good qualities in a person. Excellent Kimo Carolyn.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/4/2017 6:13:00 PM

Yes, kitschy indeed. It's ok for inanimate objects but not a grown man!! How are you doing, Carolyn. Hope to hear from you soon!

Jan Allison

Date: 4/4/2017 5:12:00 PM

I dont think I ever want to meet him Carolyn! Send him back to his mummy or better still his wife!!:-( hugs Jan xx

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 4/4/2017 4:49:00 PM

Great! Perfection in 3 lines!

Chris Green

Date: 4/4/2017 4:26:00 PM

Wow, sounds like a match made in hell or Vegas...where ever they land first. :) You did a great job with this Carolyn, in just a few lines you have created a complete vision for my mind. Really nice.

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 4/4/2017 4:06:00 PM

Oh not quite the ideal lover dear,this says so much in just a few lines, fantastic. Thanks for stopping by dear, Hope you are well, Happy to see you here, so happy.: )

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 4/4/2017 3:31:00 PM

Sharp write! Good luck in the contest xomo!