His Kitschy Ways

The lover he lures with his kitschy ways

Tawdry, vulgar, unfaithful…

     Reflection of himself





*April 4, 2017,  Broken Wings’ Kimo Contest entry.
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Marcum Wong Avatar
May 9, 2017 at 5:33 PM
Oh boy....that last line says it all! Wonderful! ; )
Callus Avatar
April 7, 2017 at 11:52 AM
Pleased to be back with congratulations, Carolyn...very much deserved! Hugs // paul
Chansarkar Avatar
April 7, 2017 at 9:39 AM
kitschy lovers:) its brilliant Carolyn!
May Avatar
April 7, 2017 at 8:52 AM
Congrats on a fine win Carolyn
La France Avatar
April 7, 2017 at 8:35 AM
Carolyn congratulations on your win in my contest with this wonderful Kimo. I love it.
Kimathi Avatar
April 7, 2017 at 7:26 AM
Great imagery!! Congrats, Carolyn, for your WIN with this fine piece!! ;-)
Michaels Avatar
April 7, 2017 at 2:23 AM
Nice write! Congratulations on your win! Regards, John.
Dietrich Avatar
April 6, 2017 at 9:55 PM
way to go in the contest, sweetie. CONGRATULATIONS.
Callus Avatar
April 6, 2017 at 2:06 PM
Each to his own, I would say, Carolyn! I would run in the opposite direction were I to meet someone like that! So far this is the only 'kitschy' entry that I have come across. Hugs // paul
Smith Avatar
April 4, 2017 at 9:22 PM
Not good qualities in a person. Excellent Kimo Carolyn.
Dietrich Avatar
April 4, 2017 at 6:13 PM
Yes, kitschy indeed. It's ok for inanimate objects but not a grown man!! How are you doing, Carolyn. Hope to hear from you soon!
Allison Avatar
April 4, 2017 at 5:12 PM
I dont think I ever want to meet him Carolyn! Send him back to his mummy or better still his wife!!:-( hugs Jan xx
Rodrigues Avatar
April 4, 2017 at 4:49 PM
Great! Perfection in 3 lines!
Green Avatar
April 4, 2017 at 4:26 PM
Wow, sounds like a match made in hell or Vegas...where ever they land first. :) You did a great job with this Carolyn, in just a few lines you have created a complete vision for my mind. Really nice.
Chircop Avatar
April 4, 2017 at 4:06 PM
Oh not quite the ideal lover dear,this says so much in just a few lines, fantastic. Thanks for stopping by dear, Hope you are well, Happy to see you here, so happy.: )
Pigeon Tart Avatar
April 4, 2017 at 3:31 PM
Sharp write! Good luck in the contest xomo!
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