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His Kiss

His lips inviting The moment so exciting He caught me and pressed his face to mine A moment of savage intertwined I will never forget he soft supple touch I remembering wanting it so much The flood of fever in a seconds kiss The smiles the childish laugh the endless wish And I won’t forget the pure bliss All from the minds fabulous reminisce

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Funom Makama

Date: 3/26/2015 12:16:00 PM

This is a well thought piece, showcasing the tender make up of your soul and the immense creativity, so rich in your mind. I so love this and thanks a lot for sharing..

Wilma Neels

Date: 8/14/2013 4:50:00 AM

Somehow a kiss like this remains with you.. Lovely piece Laura, you made me smile this afternoon :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/2/2013 8:36:00 AM

- Sooo sweeet poem Laura, beautiful !! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Johnny Rhinem

Date: 7/31/2013 12:41:00 PM

There You Are, Sweet Beautiful Laura Mckenzie. What A Lovely Poem, And Somewhat Different It Seems A Bit Somehow Your Beauty's Words ? Perhaps As Your Priceless Heart Mentioned Amid Your Kind Yet Joyful Visit, It Has Been Awhile Since I Have Beheld As Read Your Lovely Verse. Tis Good To Find You Here Again, For I Always Loved The Beauty I Found Within Your Eyes ~ Keep Brushing And I Am Going To Favour Your Treasures Once More With This Beautiful Poetic Kiss. Love, John