His Kiss

His lips inviting
The moment so exciting
He caught me and pressed his face to mine
A moment of savage intertwined
I will never forget he soft supple touch

I remembering wanting it so much
The flood of fever in a seconds kiss
The smiles the childish laugh the endless wish
And I won’t forget the pure bliss
All from the minds fabulous reminisce
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Makama Avatar
March 26, 2015 at 12:16 PM
This is a well thought piece, showcasing the tender make up of your soul and the immense creativity, so rich in your mind. I so love this and thanks a lot for sharing..
Neels Avatar
August 14, 2013 at 4:50 AM
Somehow a kiss like this remains with you.. Lovely piece Laura, you made me smile this afternoon :)
Andresen Avatar
August 2, 2013 at 8:36 AM
- Sooo sweeet poem Laura, beautiful !! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Rhinem Avatar
July 31, 2013 at 12:41 PM
There You Are, Sweet Beautiful Laura Mckenzie. What A Lovely Poem, And Somewhat Different It Seems A Bit Somehow Your Beauty's Words ? Perhaps As Your Priceless Heart Mentioned Amid Your Kind Yet Joyful Visit, It Has Been Awhile Since I Have Beheld As Read Your Lovely Verse. Tis Good To Find You Here Again, For I Always Loved The Beauty I Found Within Your Eyes ~ Keep Brushing And I Am Going To Favour Your Treasures Once More With This Beautiful Poetic Kiss. Love, John
Ferry Avatar
July 28, 2013 at 10:09 PM
Nice
Tacito Avatar
July 25, 2013 at 10:50 AM
Full of depth & decadence. Nicely done!
Sanders Avatar
July 25, 2013 at 4:08 AM
Very beautiful I love the sutle glimpse of life in love.
Kearley Avatar
July 24, 2013 at 3:31 PM
A beautiful write! :o)
Dietrich Avatar
July 24, 2013 at 3:27 PM
wow, this is cool!!! and you have given me an idea. I want to write about my WORST kiss. haha
Onclaud Avatar
July 24, 2013 at 1:56 PM
this kind of kiss is unforgettable, much like your beautiful lines... divine, laura... thnaks for dropping by..:) huggs
Devnath  Avatar
July 24, 2013 at 9:34 AM
It's a very sweet kiss poem. Excellently penned. Enjoyed the reading. Loved always, bl
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