His Kiss

His kisses were illegal Passionate, yet surprisingly forceful Better than his first More memorable than his second His third smooch was as cold as a Bollywood kiss http://idyllmusement.freeforums.net/index.cgi

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Fisayo Aderounmu

Date: 9/4/2012 4:20:00 PM

Oh cool reminiscence... look up my poem 'KISS'

Annie Lander
Date: 9/12/2012 7:05:00 PM

thank you Fisayo A

Terry O'Leary

Date: 8/29/2012 11:24:00 AM

Yeah... sometimes it rolls out that way... Terry (another good poem!)

Annie Lander
Date: 9/12/2012 7:06:00 PM

thank you Terry O leary

Cynthia Alvez

Date: 8/27/2012 4:42:00 PM

A sad song indeed...Did you consider teaching him? lol Cynthia

Annie Lander
Date: 8/30/2012 8:24:00 PM

thank you Cynthia Alvez

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/25/2012 5:17:00 AM

You write good Annie. - Welcome to P-Soup, hope you will have a lot of fun with poetry. - Have a nice weekend in sunshine & love. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Annie Lander
Date: 8/25/2012 8:59:00 AM

Thank you so much Annie Lise I am just a beginner, my grammar can sometimes be cruel... one love Annie

Gwendolen Song

Date: 8/24/2012 6:22:00 PM

This poem is full of emotion and each line builds strongly upon the last....welcome to Poetry Soup. Annie Lander...I am officially rolling out the red carpet just 4 u! gwendolen

Annie Lander
Date: 8/25/2012 8:59:00 AM

Gwendolen R . Thank you for commenting and the boosting.(:)

Robert Pettit

Date: 8/23/2012 4:08:00 PM

Welcome to this site. I know you will like it here. I hope you have more of your work to place on display here.

Annie Lander
Date: 8/25/2012 9:01:00 AM

Thank you so much for the Welcome Robert.