Annie Lander Poet Narrative

His Kiss

His kisses were illegal
  Passionate, yet surprisingly forceful
Better than his first
More memorable than his second
His third smooch was as cold as a Bollywood kiss


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Fisayo Aderounmu September 4, 2012 at 4:20 PM Oh cool reminiscence... look up my poem 'KISS' Annie Lander September 12, 2012 at 7:05 PM thank you Fisayo A

Terry O'Leary August 29, 2012 at 11:24 AM Yeah... sometimes it rolls out that way... Terry (another good poem!) Annie Lander September 12, 2012 at 7:06 PM thank you Terry O leary

Cynthia Alvez August 27, 2012 at 4:42 PM A sad song indeed...Did you consider teaching him? lol Cynthia Annie Lander August 30, 2012 at 8:24 PM thank you Cynthia Alvez

Anne-Lise Andresen August 25, 2012 at 5:17 AM You write good Annie. - Welcome to P-Soup, hope you will have a lot of fun with poetry. - Have a nice weekend in sunshine & love. - oxox // Anne-Lise :) Annie Lander August 25, 2012 at 8:59 AM Thank you so much Annie Lise I am just a beginner, my grammar can sometimes be cruel... one love Annie

Gwendolen Song August 24, 2012 at 6:22 PM This poem is full of emotion and each line builds strongly upon the last....welcome to Poetry Soup. Annie Lander...I am officially rolling out the red carpet just 4 u! gwendolen Annie Lander August 25, 2012 at 8:59 AM Gwendolen R . Thank you for commenting and the boosting.(:)

Robert Pettit August 23, 2012 at 4:08 PM Welcome to this site. I know you will like it here. I hope you have more of your work to place on display here. Annie Lander August 25, 2012 at 9:01 AM Thank you so much for the Welcome Robert.