His Heart broken

his heart broken
too late for last ditch attempts
~ everything failed
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Dietrich Avatar
November 10, 2018 at 5:48 PM
another sad one. I am trying to catch up but I don't think I ever can catch up to all your senryu and haiiku.
Gauthier Avatar
November 10, 2018 at 6:14 PM
I'm looking forward to stepping out of this downer phase... Thanks for visiting, Andrea.
Bangalee Avatar
November 9, 2018 at 12:08 AM
beautifully penned
Gauthier Avatar
November 9, 2018 at 7:04 AM
Thanks, Mahtab. Much appreciated.
Ashley Avatar
November 8, 2018 at 9:25 PM
A deeply touching sadness stirs in your poem, Line. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Gauthier Avatar
November 8, 2018 at 9:30 PM
Thanks for your lovely visit and comment, Susan.
Krutsinger Avatar
November 8, 2018 at 9:10 PM
A sad poem, my friend.
Gauthier Avatar
November 8, 2018 at 9:23 PM
Sad when people feel they have to give up.
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