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His Hands

His hands are mesmerizing; They move with easy grace. With wide palms and long fingers, He stirs this breathless place. His melody is haunting; It strikes my deepest chord. His hands pluck at my heartstrings, Touch regions unexplored. I can't help but imagine Just how those hands would feel Playing tunes against my skin - A world of notes unsealed. He concentrates so deeply, Immersed in making art. And here I sit - Pathetic! Jealous of a damned guitar!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 2/11/2013 5:27:00 AM
this one pulls the right strings too.
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Date: 1/23/2013 3:33:00 AM
there are some guitar playing hands over here jealous of how well your hands pen words..enjoyed this.. thanks.
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Date: 1/6/2013 6:32:00 PM
Nice to read your write this eve, Heather. Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 12/19/2012 10:01:00 PM
Heather, congratulations on giving Tracie, "What she rEaLlY rEaLlY WaNt-ed"..lol... always~ PD.....
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Date: 12/18/2012 6:38:00 PM
i sure remember this gorgeous poem and I'd have placed it even higher on this particular winners list. Anyway, Congratulations, Heather!
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Date: 12/18/2012 4:34:00 AM
Congratulations on your winning spot Heather love xx
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Date: 12/9/2012 6:59:00 AM
Enjoyed reading this one..Got a chuckle..I am glad that I stopped by..Sara
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Date: 12/8/2012 9:58:00 PM
ha ha ha ,great write Heather
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Date: 12/8/2012 8:46:00 PM
LOL, nice twist at the end. Love this poem. Very witty.
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Date: 12/8/2012 3:36:00 PM
Lovely write Heather! It's always appealing to see someone passionate in his undertakings, but it can take its toll on your senses - well penned.
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Date: 12/8/2012 11:10:00 AM
Very nice , had me pulled in from beginning ... cool images... hugs Michael
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Date: 12/8/2012 7:52:00 AM
Love the twist at the end! I can imagine him and his hands :)
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Date: 12/7/2012 11:11:00 PM
oh wow, another awesome poem from you, KEEP them coming. I just love how this ended with you wishing the hands were on YOU and not the guitar!
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Date: 12/7/2012 2:53:00 PM
xox~ pd
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