His Hair Flows Like a River

‘his hair flows like a river’,
Is the painting that catches my eye.
The color scheme you used;
The makeshift frames you apply.

The complimentary colors used,
Gives quite a unique touch.
But there’s something deeper,
About this painting I love so much.

When I read at your books,
And your poetry’s first drafts.
It’s exactly what I needed,
To help me with my craft.

You’re my fellow genius, mentor,
Muse, and visual arts giver.
And the wonderful painter of,
‘his hair flows like a river’.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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November 17, 2008 at 1:15 AM
Raul this is a great one my brother yo are amazing. Very clever and excellent choice of words with a terrific flow. Love this write. Michael Torres
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