His Guardian Angel Came

He went to sleep
but ne’er woke up
His guardian angel came
and gently called his name
No fuss
No pain
Just called his name
And took him
by the hand
Afore the dawn
on this brand new morn
So peaceful 
she thought
Just sleeping 
she thought
But as she softly called his name
He did not stir
No breath
He’d gone
No fuss
No pain
‘Twas then she knew 
His guardian angel came
Then for a while
With him she’d lain
As softly
She did call his name
This precious time 
Just him and her 
There was no breath
He did not stir
She said goodbye
Her love she sent
His spirit rose
His soul did soar
Eternal love forevermore
She wept and slowly closed the door

Written 14 February 2021

Contest ALL YOURS (FEB 15)
Sponsor Brian Strand 
First Place
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Gauthier Avatar
February 26, 2021 at 5:41 PM
Wow ~ beautiful, so moving ~ beautiful, Ann.
Gilmour Avatar
March 3, 2021 at 10:05 AM
Many thanks dear Line I was moved to write this after a lovely friend recently died this way. God bless him...
Sambourne Avatar
February 16, 2021 at 11:15 AM
A very moving poem. So well penned. Congratulations and best wishes, Brian
Gilmour Avatar
February 16, 2021 at 3:58 PM
Thank you so much Brian for your lovely comments and congratulations. I appreciate your visit. With kindest thoughts Ann xx
La France Avatar
February 16, 2021 at 8:42 AM
Ann, congratulations on your win in Brian's contest with this wonderful poem _Constance
Gilmour Avatar
February 16, 2021 at 9:00 AM
Oh bless you Constance that is so kind of you. I hope you are well. With kindest thoughts Ann xx
Gauthier Avatar
February 16, 2021 at 6:26 AM
OMG Ann, this is SO very beautiful. A definite FAVE for me. So sweet ~ goes right to the heart. Thank you ~
Gilmour Avatar
February 16, 2021 at 6:42 AM
Aww thank you dear Line for your lovely comments and a FAVE too, many thanks. With kindest thoughts Ann xx
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February 14, 2021 at 10:52 PM
I hope to die the same way. Loved your poem. ~~
Gilmour Avatar
February 15, 2021 at 2:42 AM
Yes it is a lovely way to go Victor, though not quite yet my friend. Thank you for your continued support dear Victor. With kindest thoughts Annxx
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