His Gift

Before you wrote that poem for me I thought I was content being single.... Now, I yearn for your affection, yearn to make you happy, strive to make you mine..... I don't want your thoughts to be about anything but me until we meet and beyond.... I yearn to be that man that has been in your dreams, I WANT YOU...... Not only in body baby but to grow with me, to love this man until death do us part..... I have been lazily looking for love not knowing I would find your affections here on PS. I knew that I was drawn here for a purpose other than my poetry...... I was drawn here for you to find me..... God has given you this chance at love my dear, don't smack his hand away.... I may not repent my sins, I may not be active in the preachings of our lord and savior, but he loves me just as much.... He wants to see me happy, wants you to find true love.... I am his gift to you boo..... I truly believe that......... Jared Pickett 6/7/2010 Asavvy1

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Jimmy Anderson

Date: 6/26/2010 12:24:00 PM

Sounds like my dude is in love! Damn! LOL You, I bet she is loving this, Bro! Good luck! Audrey sends me writes of my favs. and yours are always great reads. Very nice piece. Later, JA

Sara Kendrick

Date: 6/9/2010 5:49:00 PM

Great love write...That loved one I am sure is glad to receive such a love letter from you...Keep the creative pen flowing..Sara

Constance La France

Date: 6/9/2010 9:09:00 AM

This is a beautiful love poem, a love letter really. It just says love in each and every word. I think it is wonderful. And it rates a big 7 for me. Love Constance

John Loving Iii

Date: 6/8/2010 12:08:00 PM

the love bug has bitten again. john

Daniel Cwiak

Date: 6/8/2010 7:46:00 AM

Wonderfully written about those special emotions that keep us up at night. Dan C

Raul Moreno

Date: 6/7/2010 12:41:00 PM

Nice work Jared, I left you some soup mail...Raul

Date: 6/7/2010 11:38:00 AM

Mr JP, These words of perfection come from your heart. Beautiful melodies explode in mine when I think of you and your beautiful persona. Handsome yes, sexy yes, brilliant yes, loving yes, wonderful poet yes. But your heart is so big and warm and includes everyone. Who could help but love a gift from God. And yes He loves you and wants you to be happy as I also do. Scarlett

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 6/7/2010 10:58:00 AM

I see the weekend brought a lot of inspiration to all PoetrySoup Poets. I enjoyed reading your poetry today Jared. I wish you the best in your life now and always. Love, Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 6/7/2010 7:01:00 AM

Very impassioned plea to a lovely lady whom I hope will respond in the affirmative to u as u deserved to be happy with a soul mate who matches your poetic side as well as your other versatile sides so magnetic... if for the contest.. good luck my friend and luv the new blog photo.. cool hat.. with luv from the "Sweetheart".. one of my Etheree's is for John's and the other for Andrea's contests.. WOW hard to keep up.. oh did I say that? not for the "Sweetheart"...