His Gaze

With smoldering eyes

His gaze leaves me feeling weak.

...I tremble  with lust.






for Catie's "Fanning the Embers" contest
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Beesley Avatar
October 6, 2010 at 12:36 PM
i feel your pain on the flip side of that coin
Kendrick Avatar
October 4, 2010 at 3:33 PM
Very passionate short write..Good luck in the contest with this one that reads like a winners' circle to me..Sara
Brown Avatar
October 4, 2010 at 10:32 AM
From what I am reading this morning it looks as if everyone found some inspiration to write this weekend. Thank you for sharing your excellent poetry with us today Francine. The best to you in Catie's contest. Love, Carol
Dietrich Avatar
October 3, 2010 at 12:32 PM
Smoldering!!!
Wilson Avatar
October 3, 2010 at 11:26 AM
Wow! very sensual..Take care~Deb
Neels Avatar
October 3, 2010 at 10:44 AM
Francine, great entry for Catie's contest. Good luck to you ;)
Falotico Avatar
October 3, 2010 at 9:55 AM
Here is a true winner, very hidden and heated...love it always Michael
Flach Avatar
October 3, 2010 at 8:40 AM
I love making eye contact - not suggesting, however, that my eyes smolder. Nice write Francine and thanks so much for all of your comments on my poetry. I am not so good at recipricating - and, I apologize for that. Joe
Stella Avatar
October 3, 2010 at 8:17 AM
oh my only one guy did this to me until I found out about the real him lol but was to late I had to live and learn this is a great entry for contest my poet friend enjoyed also thanks kindly for your warm comments keep up the great work
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