His Gaze

With smoldering eyes His gaze leaves me feeling weak. ...I tremble with lust. for Catie's "Fanning the Embers" contest

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Anthony Beesley

Date: 10/6/2010 12:36:00 PM

i feel your pain on the flip side of that coin

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/4/2010 3:33:00 PM

Very passionate short write..Good luck in the contest with this one that reads like a winners' circle to me..Sara

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 10/4/2010 10:32:00 AM

From what I am reading this morning it looks as if everyone found some inspiration to write this weekend. Thank you for sharing your excellent poetry with us today Francine. The best to you in Catie's contest. Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/3/2010 12:32:00 PM

Smoldering!!!

Deb Wilson

Date: 10/3/2010 11:26:00 AM

Wow! very sensual..Take care~Deb

Wilma Neels

Date: 10/3/2010 10:44:00 AM

Francine, great entry for Catie's contest. Good luck to you ;)

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 10/3/2010 9:55:00 AM

Here is a true winner, very hidden and heated...love it always Michael

Joe Flach

Date: 10/3/2010 8:40:00 AM

I love making eye contact - not suggesting, however, that my eyes smolder. Nice write Francine and thanks so much for all of your comments on my poetry. I am not so good at recipricating - and, I apologize for that. Joe

Katherine Stella

Date: 10/3/2010 8:17:00 AM

oh my only one guy did this to me until I found out about the real him lol but was to late I had to live and learn this is a great entry for contest my poet friend enjoyed also thanks kindly for your warm comments keep up the great work