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Image result for picture of a MOON RISE

I find it amazing this lunar eclipse was the first to coincide with a Blue Moon - a second full moon in one month - in North America - in over 150 years.

Article on the Super Blue Blood Moon Eclipse at this link:

https://www.space.com/39552-super-blue-blood-moon-eclipse-thrills-spectactors.html

his gaze upon me. . . as rare and wondrous as the blue blood moon eclipse April 6, 2018 for James Edward Lee Sr.'s MONOKU PICK A PICTURE WHAT CHA SEE Contest

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Kash Poet

Date: 4/29/2018 3:17:00 AM

beautiful!Congrats!!

Laura Hay

Date: 4/25/2018 7:54:00 AM

Beautiful Andrea and congrats on your deserved win too! Warm regards, Laura.

Sandra Haight

Date: 4/21/2018 7:28:00 PM

Wonderful Monoku, Andrea! Congrats on your 1st Place win! Hugs, Sandra

Sonia Walker

Date: 4/21/2018 5:37:00 PM

Andrea, a stunning Monoku. Congratulations on your winning placement. ~

Nette Onclaud

Date: 4/21/2018 4:23:00 PM

love the unique take on red moon, andie!... sending my big congrats on your top award.. hugggs

Paul Callus

Date: 4/21/2018 3:06:00 PM

Back with deserved congratulations, Andrea...well done! Regards // paul

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 4/21/2018 9:42:00 AM

Ahh! Great to read again and again! Congrats, Andrea!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/21/2018 6:27:00 AM

- Congratulations on your 1st place in the contest, Andrea :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Susan Gentry

Date: 4/21/2018 12:22:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. Awesome and beautiful!

Line Gauthier

Date: 4/20/2018 11:13:00 PM

Congrats on a well deserved gold medal win with this lovely monoku, Andrea.

James Inman

Date: 4/14/2018 8:49:00 AM

I like this! Nice to read some of your poems today Andrea. The most I've had time to read for a while.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 4/9/2018 8:31:00 PM

Perfect Andrea! Luna's mysteries run deep! : )

Marc Acrich

Date: 4/8/2018 4:16:00 PM

Akkina Downing

Date: 4/8/2018 1:45:00 PM

You and Paul used the same photo and both of you and his monoku are stunningly beautiful. Fabulous job, Drea! Hugs :)

Caycay Jennings

Date: 4/8/2018 9:20:00 AM

Now I want to know what sign the lunar eclipse was in - I'll check it out. Great use of your 17 syllables - good kick! Love ... CayCay

Caycay Jennings
Date: 4/8/2018 9:24:00 AM

Looked in to it and realized I goofed again. This pic is lunar eclipse/blue moon and NOT the dawn/dusk that I wrote my monoku about. Some people just need to buy a vowel occasionally, me, an entire clue! You inadvertently saved me again. Thank you, my love. Off to kick myself again (I should build a special room)

Paul Callus

Date: 4/7/2018 4:35:00 PM

Like my moon monoku, you used exactly 17 syllables, Andrea. You pay fitting tribute to the red/blue moon...an inspiration to you and many other writers! Regards // paul

The Situation

Date: 4/7/2018 3:57:00 PM

WHY THIS POEM HIT ME LIKE A JACK HAMMER? This poem is so much about me. And I admit there are certain women I have this "gaze" for. One sitting behind me at this moment on another computer. It's an infatuation. I'm single and free I have a few of them.

Maria Williams

Date: 4/7/2018 8:31:00 AM

The image and the Monoku are beautiful Andrea. Good luck in the contest....Maria xx

Alexis Y.

Date: 4/7/2018 7:33:00 AM

Hi Andrea, This is just breathtaking. The photo and Monoku compliment each other very well:-) Alexis

Jan Allison

Date: 4/7/2018 5:24:00 AM

very very beautiful Andrea!:-) hugs Jan xx

Supraja Kannan

Date: 4/7/2018 4:02:00 AM

Wow... What a beautiful analogy! Loved it Andrea.... Best wishes...It was visible here and I captured the super blue blood moon eclipse completely with my DSLR.

Tom Cunningham

Date: 4/7/2018 2:26:00 AM

Beautiful Andrea, I didn't witness that one, too far east.don't forget 27th July this year. Good luck in the contest. Tom

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 4/6/2018 10:37:00 PM

Very nice, Andrea! Bespeaks of love!

Line Gauthier

Date: 4/6/2018 9:58:00 PM

Lovely, Andrea. Superbly done.

Matthew Anish

Date: 4/6/2018 9:40:00 PM

Sweet short poem! I just posted a rather long poem-please let me know what you think! Peace & Love Matthew Anish